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for Project: Destiny

by Ravenx

person Theblackpanther
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I can't wait for Ryou's baby boy! I know he'll be the cutest ^_^
person Randi
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but the all boy thing is a little boring. You should give Bakura and Ryou a girl just to mix it up.
person Sushi
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. heehee. I think that Ryou/Bakura should have the girl. Just to piss Bakura off. Haha! Sorry, I love this story.
person Feli Lupan Draco
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Ryou. He's last! And the story is almost over! *pouts*
person Az
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! Hi!! It feels like ages since i've been here, but since i am currently in the vicinity of a computer WITH an internet line i shall put it to good use and review your chapters... (btw, thanks so much for emailing to me the newly uploaded chapters, i really appreciate it). Okay, now to the reviews....

Bakura is so cute wanting to teach his child to kick yami's kid up... but somehow, i don't think yami's kid is gonna take sitting down... oh no... one does not come from a reincarnated pharoah and not have a few tricks up one's sleeve.. i do believe marik and bakura will be in for a surprise (i can't wait!!)

seto and joey are the height of cuteness!!! i bet jou's 'birthday present' made that high priest's day... possibly the best present he's gotten in oh, let's say 5000 yrs??!!! ;-)

This was a really great chapter (as usual)... but watch this space... i am adamant to review all your new chapters... so be prepared for a torrent of gushing and praises from me... ;-) -Az
person Az
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mokuba is the sweetest thing ever!!! He's gonna be the best uncle any kid could have... especially on xmas and birthdays... ;-) Joey's not gonna run out of ppl helping him for sure... wonder if our dear Mokie's gonna use his nephew as an excuse to skip school... I know I would (>_<)... hey will Mokie have a valentine of his own soon? Write something abt him... I do love your version of Mokuba Kaiba, and really no one else could do justice to his character

y'know, i'm so looking forward to Bakura actually being a dad... I mean I can see Ryou as a dad, he'd be great, for sure, but Bakura... i can't wait!!! Is that info abt baby's hiccuping an actual fact... sorta a funny image isn't it, ryou bouncing up and down every time the baby hiccups... ;-)

Well, I'm off to the next chapter... see u there!! - Az
person Az
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! a baby!! Malik had a baby!! Lyca Karem Ishtar sound so perfect!! so Egyptian... I can't believe Marik is a dad first!! i thought Yugi and Yami would have had that honor, but hey i'm not complaining. And a boy!! Bakura and Yami must be seething inside... Oooo.... I want more... and I am gonna get more... Off to the next chapter!!! - Az
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schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz tell me one of them will have a girl?! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh ok that was random, anyone, plz update soon!
person Az
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just realised that me review for chapter 26 (or 27) was truncated half way... and don't remember what i wrote... But i shall try..

Review for chapter 27:

Mokie is adorable!! The best ever!! He so should have his own valentine, he would be the best boyfriend. he's already on his way to being a great uncle... maybe in your free time you'll do a romance with him, you write such a wonderful potrayal of Mokuba, if anybody should write abt him, it should be you. I can't wait for bakura to be a dad, I think Ryou will be delightfully surprised...

Okay that's all i remember, now back to this review:

Review for chapter 29:

Awww marik is such a sweetie dad.... I think Malik has nothing to worry about.... he so obviously dotes on little Lyca. Jade is quite the character, she should write a book, How to tame Yamis without being sent to the Shadow Realm... it'd be a real best seller i sure!!

I've said this once and I'll say it again. JOU and SETO are the BEST COUPLE EVER!!!! I am so in LOVE with them, it's not even funny!!! Jou is SO CUTE!!! and Seto.... oh be still my pounding heart... *sigh*

okay, moving on to the next chapter... sigh.... i love this story
person Dancingpixies
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Joey had his kid! Though I wanted him to have a girl...lolol Great Chapter, and I can't wait for more!

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