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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't leave it there!!!!! Ah you mean person, please update soon! I loved it and the way Seto cares is so cute.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, I love it. Write more please!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! I CAN'T BELIEVE TIS!!! UPDATE!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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...*takes a _deep_ intake of breath*...
...*about 40 minutes and 3,000 short puffs later*...
...[insert voice of Janice from 'Friends']...OH. MY. ~GOD~. HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US LIKE THAT?!...OHMYGOD! I KNOW I'M NOT IN MY RIGHT MIND RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I AM LITERALLY DEMANDING YOU COME BACK RIGHT NOW AND UPDATE!...AHHHHH! THAT WAS ~TOTALLY, KICK-ASS COOL!~...
...at first when I was reading the summary, I was like, oh, cool, that's original...Seto and Jou are ~knowingly~ second cousins until he has an accident and they discover they aren't related and fall in love!...then I read the phone call scene and was like, ok, so Jou just used the 'I'm the 2nd cousin to the rich teen CEO so I could be close enough to him until I can be his' line when he named Seto as his next of kin...but...YOU TOTALLY BLEW ME OUT OF THE WATER WITH THAT KICKER IN THE END! I hope it's not gonna be a j/k moment; I would like to see how far this 'brother' thing gets taken!...
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS PLOT! IT'S THE FIRST I'VE SEEN OF IT SO I AM REALLY EXCITED TO SEE WHERE YOU GO WITH THIS!
Best of luck and thanks for that jaw-dropping read! Ja! ^_^
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...*takes a _deep_ intake of breath*...
...*about 40 minutes and 3,000 short puffs later*...
...[insert voice of Janice from 'Friends']...OH. MY. ~GOD~. HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US LIKE THAT?!...OHMYGOD! I KNOW I'M NOT IN MY RIGHT MIND RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I AM LITERALLY DEMANDING YOU COME BACK RIGHT NOW AND UPDATE!...AHHHHH! THAT WAS ~TOTALLY, KICK-ASS COOL!~...
...at first when I was reading the summary, I was like, oh, cool, that's original...Seto and Jou are ~knowingly~ second cousins until he has an accident and they discover they aren't related and fall in love!...then I read the phone call scene and was like, ok, so Jou just used the 'I'm the 2nd cousin to the rich teen CEO so I could be close enough to him until I can be his' line when he named Seto as his next of kin...but...YOU TOTALLY BLEW ME OUT OF THE WATER WITH THAT KICKER IN THE END! I hope it's not gonna be a j/k moment; I would like to see how far this 'brother' thing gets taken!...
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS PLOT! IT'S THE FIRST I'VE SEEN OF IT SO I AM REALLY EXCITED TO SEE WHERE YOU GO WITH THIS!
Best of luck and thanks for that jaw-dropping read! Ja! ^_^
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a way to drop the bomb. i can't wait to see how you are going to work the brother thing in. hope you update soon
Ja
Ja
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm hooked. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I'm sure Maggie agrees that puppy abuse makes us weep and want to cuddle Jou all better again, I'm very curious to how this story plays out.
Yes, I know the 'secret' but I still want to see how the story goes =D
Yes, I know the 'secret' but I still want to see how the story goes =D
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is cool. I like the concept a lot - it's newer than some of the other stuff out there. Be careful of homonyms (words that sound the same but have different meanings and/or spellings). :D