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for Tabi no Kokoro

by Khenemetset

schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!! ITS A CLIFF-HANGER OF DOOM!!!!!!! IT WAS GETTING SO GOOD!!!!

Talibah: DUDE I WANTED TO SEE THE CUTE MEETING!!!! YOUR KIDDING ME!!!

Holy crap....when the heck did you get out of your tomb....

Talibah: 2 minutes ago...
person evil pharaoh atem
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice...me likie...its too good for words to express ^_^
person evil pharaoh atem
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe...too lazy to sign in.

anyways, i likie the chappie...and you better update faster...or else, this pharaoh's gonna go insano :-P you know how Is be...*hyper on soda*
person Camille
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I like this so far.
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@Reyn: I never said anything about him being a teacher. I have no clue where you're getting that from. Oo Care to clarify for me perhaps where you're getting this assumption.
person catti
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kami....where's my kleenex? That was great!!! Hope to see more. Welcome back to writing. catti
person Reyn
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking good, with the exception of one small thing. Yugi was in his 2nd year of highschool when he had the puzzle, and if 5 years have passed, he should technically be in college...unless he was held back. He couldn't possibly be a teacher cuz that would take at least a full 4 years of college, meaning he'd be in his last year...so maybe he's in the middle of his student teacher training? I dunno, I give up.

But yeah, that aside, this story is defintely looking good ^_^

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