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by hatochiisai

person jin1377
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!omg!!!!! i can't stop laughing!!!! this is too good!!!!!!! omg!!!! yami's hair!!!!!! i was laughing and crying with that ouija-bord!!!!! laughing cause i'm always for the bad guy and crying cause i was afraid!!!!! this is really good!!!!!!! i love it!!!! keep thigs up!!! ja ne!!!!
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Dear gods that was funny! you scared the hell out of m at first though! what I wanna know is how Yami got in the house, and damn I loved how Marik and Bakura ggot back at him! great job!
person laineyue
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beware of a Jason-like can can dancer running amok with fellow belated trick-or-treaters accompanying him.

dude like the riddles!
person yunasgrace
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! i was readin the story and i cracked up when bakura started slappin malik XDDDD i could just picture him holding his face with wide staring at bakura and then gettin slapped again.
i half expected ryou to freak out at the end with yami's hair on the work tops coz i know i wouldnt be to thrilled looking at some hairy...thing with sweets and stuff in it XDDDD
i love your writing style... and the why you write your comedy. i had my parents and brother trying to stop me from laughing all night XDDD
good luck
yunasgrace
person Feylin
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bakura and Marik are great i love them
this fic is so funny
Yami Yugi deserved it
person Marik_Ishtar
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written Hato... as always! The humor was superb. I finally made the move to aff from spiral. I still feel bad about the Ryouin stealing your fic's thing! Thanks for letting me use your name in The Heart of A Wolf.
person ...
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is still laughing her ass off*..............that was so totally wicked!!!!!!!............that lemon was hot too.........if you do anymore oike this let me know..........*hugs* ja ne and love as thou wilt! *is too lazy to write anything else*.........ta!
person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Ah, now that was certainly the most amusing ficlet I've read in a very long time XD
Well done, both of you ^^ The emotions during the riddle session were well expressed, and then Yami's punishment was just great XD
Although I read it 2 days after the holiday, I still think this made quite a wonderful Halloween ficlet =D
~YRE
person j.s.
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
dat was sooo funny
really brightened my day
malik as a can can danser....i can c dat
and yami is pure evil, he deserved all dat bakura and marik gave him!! especially da hair cut!!
person bjsu
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi this was cute i liked it . It sounded scary . I realy don't like Ouji boards i've heard some strange stories from friends . I can't beleive they did that to yami not that he deseved it . I thought you were going to do one on a possed Ryou . Just wondering . But I do like this one.
Ps i thooought the yamis liked each other , and i didn't no the ouija board came from greece thats cool . see ya .

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