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by hatochiisai

person Tara
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol that was awsome. for the record i knew it was Yami. i'm not sure when i figured it out but i had my strong suspisions. i love their revenge and those are some awsome riddles. lol i like the soul room joke. that had me cracking up. awsome fic.
person Sharpie.
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_> A. M. A. Z. I. N. G. Thuroughly sexy, and interesting. Though I did get confused, as to how the board could spell out sentences so quickly, and make sense to the others. Would they not forget what the board spelled out? I would easily lose track. Unless the board was actually /speaking/. And, yes. The costumes made me laugh. I had a hard time imagining them all writhing in fear, with Mariku dressed as a Dominatrix and Malik a Cancan dancer. I always wanted a little muskateer hat, or however you spell it. I'm too lazy to look it up. I always enjoy your stories, though I never review. Sorry for that. I still appreciate your work. And that thing about some person stealing your work. Could we find a more proper synonym for 'Retarded'?
person darkrosedamael
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! did i have a blast with this fic. at first it was scaring me but after yami popped up i was like 'yea i should have seen that coming.'
person cas (2 lazy 2 log)
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFL Omg! LOOOOL That ending was hilarious! And I agree, Malik looks dead sexy as a can-can dancer! Nice job! It kinda creeped me out with the board and everything. ~shivers~ But damn, it rocked. And Yami! You got what you deserved! Go Malik! You with a chainsaw! Yeehaw! :D

OOoooh! I hope you do another ic with these guys. I was just angry at Ryou for interrupting Bakura and Marik's little session with Malik. I was all in to it! Man! I would've been the happiest girl on earth if you woulda done a Bakura/Marik/Malik. But, alas, this was great too. Ryou needs to back up and let the yamis attention go to Malik. ~_^ Sexy fic!

E-mail me or something if you decide to make another fic with these four. Maybe exclude Ryou...Heeheehee. This really was kick-ass! Fantastic, funny, and kinda freaky. =D I loved it! Man, if I knew how to make this one of my faves (don't diss XD) then this would definitely be one of them. Awesome job! And you can e-mail me just to chat or anything, too. :D Wonderful work! Keep it up! ~two thumbs-up~

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