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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should keep on writing this story. its great!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is some promise to your story. But it has a hurried feel to it and there are no breaks in it. That makes it a bit difficult to read. Don't forget to put in the disclaimer. I do hope that you update it soon.