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for The Jungle

by hatochiisai

person SpiritDancer1
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! You GO Yami! I loved Yami's speech to Kaiba about it being wrong to change people into hybrids for their own selfish purposes. Eveything he said was SO COOL! Also cool was Malik's speech to Marik and Bakura about their humanity. Ack, poor Ryou though, being so confused. I loved that he fought Rex though, I was hoping he would. I also hope Ryou eventually finds out Pegasus was the one that ordered him. He SO needs to know that before he actually starts LIKING Pegasus (eww, bad thought, very bad thought). Oh, and thank you for killing Anzu in an earlier chapter--she's just so much FUN to destroy! ;)
person kay
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Anira_Oceanfang
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Finally! the update! Sorry about not reviewing as often but school and home work are killing me this semester! Very good though and update agin soon!
person SpiritDancer1
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I aboslutely adore this story and can't get enough of it! I'm so glad you're back from break! Pegasus is the high mighty king of mega-jerks, I would SO love it if Marik bit off his -ahem- for being such an ass to Ryou. Oh, and could something horribly painful and crippling happen to Rem? I think I hate that bitch nearly as much as Ryou does. Seriously though, this is a spectacular story, I can't tell you how happy I am when I see a new chapter up. Please keep up the good work!
person Yamisgirl13
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Apology accepted. I didn't take it personally so don't worry yourself too much over it. Great story by the way. I've been waiting for the update on this story. It's fantastic. Pegasus is a real ass, Malik is sweet, and Ishizu is a bit of a wimp. I adore this story. Bakura was right, Rem is evil. I hope you can update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Yamisgirl13
person Drago
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. i still think it would be funny if Joey got turned in to a dog.....
person sglily
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're back! And in a big way! Loved the chapter... I especially loved Malik's sister's reaction to Marik! Priceless! So much going on... Bakura breaking out... that was funny with Yami egging him on. Marik meeting up with Malik... always an interesting pair. Oh, the suspense of it all! Ryou with Pegasus... gag! It's getting ugly, too. Pegasus is surely not going to like it when he finally beds the bunny and finds that Ryou isn't liking it one little bit. Loved Malik's reaction to Marik "ruining" the bunny! Oh, God! Too funny! Any plans to flashback and show that lovely bit of the lion and bunny getting it on? Aw... come on! Lovely chapter and well worth the wait! Welcome back, love!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! I can't wait to see if Kura and Marik track down Ryou!!! and how Malik will react to seeing Bakura!!...^^
person OsaP
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooo, first off i love this fic to death. ^_^ secondly i'm not a big fan of ryou/marik or kaiba/yami. actually i very much dislike the latter, but this fic is too damn good to not read! i think i dislike the fact Pegasus is eerily involved more than anything, but that's why i love this fic. there's a butt-load of conflict and less than a week has transpired during Ryou's time at the pet shop. the whole idea for this fic is very unique. sure, ppl do the whole 'anime charas as animals' thing, but the reason for it is usually magic of somesort or falling into an accursed spring or something of that nature. not only do you two wunnerful authors explain how it happened using much more believable circumstances, but you weave in the fact that such circumstances are very much illegal and should be revealed to the public lest more innocents be kidnapped. and i should hate Pegasus, i really should, but i can't cuz he's taken such good care of Ryou ubt it's his fault the poor boy's in this mess to begin with. >_< gah! nothing's black and white in this fic! that's why i'm so friggin excited about the whole thing! on a b aser note, i like the animals you chose for everyone. i think Ryou makes a perfect rabbit and Bakura an adorably pissy skunk. Marik being a gentle lion just seems to work as well. Yami as a bird... *snickers* appropriate, but amusing nonetheless.

in all honesty i wasn't going to touch this fic. EVER. it made me a bit nervous to say the least. however, i needed a 'hatochiisai fix' and just about the only thing i hadn't read was this. now i'm very pleased. :] so pleased that i had to tell my friend all about this fic and just how great it is. she hates YGO fiction for the most part, but every time i tell her about one of hato's fics she gets all excitable. aiya, i just can't fully express how much i love this fic. you two should collaborate all the time. for the rest of your lives. please? *puppy dog eyes* oh my. i'm being a fangirl. >_>

keep up the good work you two!
person jenn
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please post chapter 8? the suspence is driving me NUTS! pleasepleaseplease!?
thank u

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