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for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

by MizumiBlu

person paranoidcharlotte
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEHE Seto's all hormonal! HE'S SO CUTE HORMONAL! OOOOOOO is this new student Marik? Does Malik know Marik is back? OOOOOHHHH I can't wait till he finds out he's pregnant I reckon his and Jou's reaction will be HILARIOUS!
person Psycho Demon Witch
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* that argument between Seto and Jou was hilarious. I look forward to reading more.
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the possessive, dominant jou in your fics. can't wait for more!
person Annya
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue i like as always your writting. i read your other story start fine, but i like more this one; and this was a funny chapter.I'll wait the next up date.

Good luck and Bye^^
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mood swings and cravings you've got to love them. Jou is slowly putting things together. I hope he can figure things out soon and get Seto to the doctor. I hope this new student won't cause trouble for our couple. They just got rid of one pain in the ass they sure as hell don't need another one. I hope you feel better soon. Being sick sucks. Get some rest. I'll be looking for your review to my story which has taken on a life of its own. Originally I had only twelve chapters planned but the way its going I don't know now. So read and enjoy and update as soon as you feel better.
person SilverYaoiHellion
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mood swings, odd food choices, and peeing, lots of peeing; all of these the signs of pregnancy and no one's able to figure it out? Well, I guess that's what he gets for being a man! Please update both of your stories soon!!! When I saw that you updated 'Gettin' Bi Mai' I was over joyed; when I saw you update this awesome story, I almost jumped out of my chair! Please don't wait too long! I know that you aren't going to leave your readers like this, but waiting for so long is so bad for stress levels...
person girlo
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh..... He'd best be off to see that doctor! Or I'll.... umm... keep reading to find out what he really does.....
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite series! The stories are all well written and have a perfect blend of angst, humor, action, and sex! Uke!Seto is a major plus too. Please don't wait so long to update this time!
person jess
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay 4 another chaapter. and yes i'm reading this fic too. update soon and i still can't get over the faact that to kill a kaiba and to keep a katsu became a mpreg fic. it's great anyway so update soon.

PS: yay 4 jou's angel cause seto in these fics is the bestest and he's so cute. i <3 seto and jou fics
person hitori
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! That shit was fucking funny!! All over peanut butter!! ROFLMAO!!!! this is gotta be the funniest chapter you've written so far!!! *gasps for air* on god *gasp* i can't breathe!

and your comment about laughing in class made my day! seriously. i was at work, and this guy just kept on mean mugging me, and later on in the night he called me a "nigger" and i called him a "bitch" and if he didn't watch it, i'd tie him into a chair and rape his son in front of him...and i don't even know if he has a son...but i was just very....whats a good word..irked?...that he would say some shit like that. i really wanted to take him behind a random building and fuck his world up. just thinking about it puts me in a bad mood. BUT!! you made everything better with that one comment and i thank you!

OH! and i told Juju what you sayed and she said "fuck yes" heh, i think you might have expanded her ego just a[lot]little bit.

sooo...Mr. I-want-seto-to-have-my-kid is...Odji, hey? hmm, very interesting *grins* me wanna read more!

well..nothing interesting[POSITIVELY] has happened to me lately. so no funny story, this time ^_~ ttyl girl

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