rate_review Reviews

not bad, but certanly one of your weaker fics.

I loved it! This was so cool. Yugi really got Yami.

^-^ It was sweet. A bit rushed and choppy at spots, but, hey, that's what one-shots are all about, telling a story in one go right? I honestly have read this one at least four times and just now realized that NO ONE fricken reviewed. I was like WTF?! It was a really cute idea and yet no one dared to tell you about it?! Oh the humanity! ^-^ Anyway, keep up the good work and *Returns the pokes with stick* update darkness consumes the light ne?Lechan

REPOST - LOST IN TRANSFER

Hey guys look...This author put "Flames will used to make popcorn"

Bakura: *smirk* Hey what about all 7000 flames of hell?

It's not our faults We're rulers of the Hell

Marik: Nope...not our faults...YOUR FAULT!!!

Why is it MY fault?

Bakura: Who is the one that challanged Ra to banish us to hell? Hmmmm???

*small voice* Me?

Marik and Bakura: YES!!

FREDDIE *cries* Their mean *sob*

Freddie Kreuger: *gives cuddle*

Marik and Bakura: Creepy...

Freddie: *sings to calm Millie down* 1-2 Freddie's coming for you, 3-4 knocking on your door, 5-6 breaking down the sticks...

Marik: *whispers* That doesn't make sense

Freddie: Who cares she's asleep now shush...

zzzZZZZzzzZZZZZzzzZZZZZzZZZZZzZZZzZzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzZZZZZzzz..........

Freddie *kisses her on the head* Nightie night Princess...

Bakura: In a twisted way, Kreaugher, that was cute...I'll never say that again...

Freddie: You'd better not!!!

*all of hell: goes to sleep*

Pretty good for a one shot.