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Oh... oh my!! I LOVED it! Very engaging and Jounouchi had my heart from the get-go, and strangely so did Otogi and Honda. I don't really know how to explain myself, but I REALLY liked this story, and your version of these characters were awesome! But... will Kaiba reach for world-domination?? (that sounded like something out of the dub, but seriously??). Because.. Kaiba is the kind of character that I'd have an uneasy time trusting with the worlds well-being. He can be an underhanded guy when he thinks he needs to or he just wants to. If it wasn't for the fact that this story is finished (RIGHT?), then I would seriously be worried for the state of society when all important posts are manned by people answering to one man only. I must admit to being as naïve as Jou, I thought that the power-trip-story-cover was merely that - a cover. I also liked how you handled Mai. She is one strong woman, and I hate her being bashed around or made into some bitch, just to make yaoi possible. Over all - THANK YOU for an awesome story! ^_^

I'll try to tell you what I think of this story but I know that no matter what it won't make it justice. I was going to go out today but I couldn't stop reading. "Just another paragraph", I tried to fool myself. I read it all in a sit, and I'm pretty sure I'll be re-reading it later. Joey and Seto felt so real, so awesome (I know, I know, Jonouchi, I just got used to the American name, uff), and the sexy scenes were sooo hot! How about... an extra chapter with some lemony goodies, hm? Hmmm? Alright, I won't press the issue. For now. Well, what else... thanks so much for this great piece of entertainment and hotness!

I just realized this is from 2007 and you probably won't give us lemony goodness... but I realized something. Is it missing the first chapter? I hope you still come here to read about your fans and get this.
Once again, wonderful story. And Jo, I understand ya, Seto makes me drool too.

Oh my god. That was adorable and as amazing as I'd hoped!! I loved everything about it :D

*clapping hands* Wonderful!! Terrific!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!!!! Wow... Loved it!! I can't wait to read more of your fics.


~Naye :)

OMG!!!! I love you!!! This fanfic was great. I loved it!! I can't wait for your next one. And will you ever finish The Offer? Anyway until our paths cross again.

lol. Oh Seto you sly dog.
Seto ruling the world. That will be interesting.

*snerks still* I just love the ending so much because of Seto XD

I hated to see this end. This is a wonderful story. I love it. I hope you do a sequel.

That was a really, really, REALLY good story.