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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love and adore,
this story.
It's stunning,
remarkable,
and spellbinding.
I cannot wait for the next,
installment.
=D
this story.
It's stunning,
remarkable,
and spellbinding.
I cannot wait for the next,
installment.
=D
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... Intense. Seto's so miserable, and it's like he's afraid to let himself feel better. So sad... *sniffle*
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome please update soon
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Please continue.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ive really enjoyed this.
the writing style is excelent some of the events in the story seemed to be a bit to brief but other than that fantastic
I had to sign in to review so that means something lol
the writing style is excelent some of the events in the story seemed to be a bit to brief but other than that fantastic
I had to sign in to review so that means something lol
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is an amazing story. I've never seen anything where Seto is not rich, or at least comfortably well off. Super creative.
I can totally feel his pain and confusion. You've written this so well.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
I can totally feel his pain and confusion. You've written this so well.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please continue writing and post again soon.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter. I'm glad Seto is starting to trust Yami more. I hope he can talk to Mokuba again. Maybe Yami can help him with Gozoburo now that he knows.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.
...are you aware that all you have to do is change the names and maybe alter character appearence a tiny bit and you'll have a completly origional story with no connection to Yu-Gi-Oh whatsoever?
...are you aware that all you have to do is change the names and maybe alter character appearence a tiny bit and you'll have a completly origional story with no connection to Yu-Gi-Oh whatsoever?