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by tavia454

person shirozzu
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO WAY THERE'S ALREADY CP 16?!!
It wasn't there when I last checked.. BUT I'M IN HEAVEN NOW, I CAN CONTINUE READING!! T.T
THANK YOUUUUU!!! <3
person shirozzu
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, even if it was a bit confusing. I never would have though that they would marry Atemu and Yugi!
I still hate that Atemu thinks Yugi a liar... T.T They need to talk through it, but Atemu doesn't seem to be willing to listen... What will happen?? Next chapter pleeeeease!! *pleading eyes*
person MewMew2
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, this last chapter was pretty confusing........thanks for posting though!
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That ending is making me even more impatient to read more. I need to know what happens next. The gigantic misunderstanding between Yugi and Atemu is really depressing. Atemu is such an ASS, but I can't wait for the moment that he finds out he was wrong. I'm pretty sure he'll definitely feel like an ass and he has a lot of butt-kissing to do to even garner Yugi's attention again. I think he should be made to suffer a little bit by having Yugi be reluctant to accept him again. He needs to prove himself worthy of Yugi now. Anyways, great chapter. I can't wait for the next arc.
person catti
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ill bring the flame thrower and you provide the marshmellows...laughs....
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Exciting, I can tell things are just getting started so it'll be fun to see where it all goes. Poor Yugi, Poor Atem- both blind :) I think I feel worse for Yugi though.. To find out Atem could doubt him that much over what some drunk said... ;D Looks like the fireworks are going to be fun. Waiting for more -Naomie
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it! please post those next chapters soon!
person MewMew2
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, the shout out was deeply appreciated. I eagerly await the arrival of the next arc.
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* I had no idea you'd been following that one. I've been attempting to work on it. Motivation has been scarce with bad health and marriage issues. but I have hopes I should have an update soon.

This chapter was really good! I hope Atemu sobers up before he does something STUPID!
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Atemu, don't believe that lying bastard, Dartz. He has to be LYING!!! I can't take this angst but I love your story for it. I can't wait until Solomon and the others finally show up. And I'm definitely looking forward to how Dartz' deceit is going to play out.

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