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I know it has been a wicked long time since you've updated this story, just wanted to let you know that it had a lot of potential! It kind of drags and has a lot of filler, in my opinion. It is a little strange with how fast Alexis falls for your character but it still takes ten chapters for just one afternoon. It added some cute moments between them though. I like how friendly Trevor is, I can see why Alexis might fall for a guy like that after dealing with Jaden's shenanigans for a while. I'm a big Jaden x Alexis guy but I definitely understand her feeling frustrated. The smut was nice as well, heh. 

Dear CantThinkOfAnything,

I really have tried to avoid all the clichéd "beat around the bush and not telling each other how they really feel" because quite frankly, that gets entirely overused. So I thought I would just cut right to the chase. Perhaps you have a idea for not having 10 chapters making one day, but I like to spread it out, you might say I'm still in the "Introduction Arc." I have been meaning to update, really, I just still need to work out a few more things and what direction I'm going to go. I still have yet to have a "defined" conflict or anything. Hence why I haven't updated in a while. :(

Hey there! Good for you going on with this chapter despite your computer problems, rest assured I'll read the rest of it when youget around to it. I think it's safe to assume that Trevor and Alexis are a couple now and are entitled to some 'fun' Anyway have a Merry Christmas and a Happy and SAFE New Year!

I'm back! Sorry for the delays in my reviews but life goes on as they say. So...Trevor and Alexis are going to do some fishing huh? Perhaps the time alone might lead to something more...you never know. *Winks* Next chapter to find out!

Oh dear...looks like Trevor will have to think fast to get out of trouble for making Alexis wait. However it strikes me that Trevor is a fairly honest guy, if he just tells Alexis the truth as to WHY he's late then I'm sure she'll forgive him. She might even complement him for being so nice to stop for one of her friends...next chapter to find out!

Well! Congralutions are in order for Trevor he and Alexis seem to be getting one quite well AND with the possibility of becoming a couple! However I have noticed that it's WHEN couples are alone in stories like this is MIGHT be spoiled by someone or something else. I'll read and and see if I'm right, next chapter!

HA! I KNEW it! The moment was spoiled by Hassleberry of all people, ah well...it's not the end of the world. As Trevor and Alexis are now a couple there will be plenty of times to 'fool around' *Chuckles* Anyway next chapter to see if they can salvage the situation!

So Hassleberry knows that Trevor and Alexis are a couple, however as he saw nothing more than them holding hands there's nothing to really tell his friends is there? They're safe on that front for the time being, Hassleberry strikes me as a guy who does not gossip. You've done a good job to get this far I hope to see some more chapters again later on. See you next update!

Oh boy...Alexis has put Trevor on the spot now! Can he give an answer that WON'T spoil things betweeen them? Next chapter to find out!

My word that was a short sharp duel! Trevor obviously knows what he's doing if he beat Alexis so easily, any wonder she was so impressed! Next chapter to see how the 'tour' goes!