rate_review Reviews

this... story... has nearly killed me... omj poor seto... but damn did it make me feel like -i- was on a sugar high with all the laughing. i really hope you finish this story, doesn't matter that it's after halloween now...

btw, i noticed that your grammar is really quite terrible, if english isn't your first language you should really get a beta maybe two, if english IS your first language, then no excuses, read over your work at least three times to find all the errors...
~K

ashray~!!!!!! hey it's yugithecutie ^^ how r u? i love this story!!

O_o wow i am actually scared at what those two are going to do to the town. sugar and "special coffee" and two hyper yamis what can happen lol wait to see what happens .