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June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. There are a few spelling errors but otherwise I love the story.
I think I would have lost my "Happy Moment" if my grandfather interupted me!
He was funny though.
Kudos
Remywolf
I think I would have lost my "Happy Moment" if my grandfather interupted me!
He was funny though.
Kudos
Remywolf
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let me put it this way: I LOVE Your Story!!! *___*
The idea is great! I loved the way Yuugi toyed with Yami. The whole situation of Yuugi knowing who's in the tree made things really interesting for me ^.~ I was like: What's gonna happen next? Next? Next? XD
Till finally Yami took over! Wooow, that was hot! I'm still drooling XD I loved how Yuugi seemed to be controlling the whole scene! *grins*
You managed to describe the tension between the guys and the oh! the hotness! ^.~ Well done!
There's just one thing... Personally, I didn't like the idea of Gramps being an alcohol addict u.u Yeah, I know, AU and stuff... It's just not my thing. I'd've liked better if Gramps was drunk 'only this one time), maybe because of a friend's b-day or something. But, in the end, it's your story! Do as you please. (Just give it a thought: Both Yuugi and Yami have an addict at home, and espec. Yami still thinks it funny? I don't know about you, but in my opinion there's nothing funny about having to deal with addicts. Maybe... you find some time to think about that, 'kay?
Still, I loved it! Keep it up! ^^
R-chan
The idea is great! I loved the way Yuugi toyed with Yami. The whole situation of Yuugi knowing who's in the tree made things really interesting for me ^.~ I was like: What's gonna happen next? Next? Next? XD
Till finally Yami took over! Wooow, that was hot! I'm still drooling XD I loved how Yuugi seemed to be controlling the whole scene! *grins*
You managed to describe the tension between the guys and the oh! the hotness! ^.~ Well done!
There's just one thing... Personally, I didn't like the idea of Gramps being an alcohol addict u.u Yeah, I know, AU and stuff... It's just not my thing. I'd've liked better if Gramps was drunk 'only this one time), maybe because of a friend's b-day or something. But, in the end, it's your story! Do as you please. (Just give it a thought: Both Yuugi and Yami have an addict at home, and espec. Yami still thinks it funny? I don't know about you, but in my opinion there's nothing funny about having to deal with addicts. Maybe... you find some time to think about that, 'kay?
Still, I loved it! Keep it up! ^^
R-chan