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Omg I can just imagine poor little mokubas face

"big brother what are you doing to jou O.O" *faints* BWAHAHAHAHAHA


Update reaaalllly soon

Oh shit.... Mokuba... that can't be good.

On the edge of my seat for more!

this is really well done i really enjoyed this so far keep the good work up

Now before I get into my review let me share with you the line that left my mouth as I was reading the end of the latest chapter... "Fuck no! Mokusba, don't open that door!" I always get the damnedest looks from my friends when I speak while read fanfics.
But back to the story! I very much love hos this is developing. Even if I wish the chapters were longer lol. I can't wait to see ho Seto's baby brother handles what he is about to walk in on!

Wow. When I started reading this yesterday, I didn't expect much, I have to admit. The story seemed to be either completely senseless PWP or of the darker, more cruel kind. The first cannot hold my attention for a longer time and the latter is just not my thing. But you pleasantly surprised me, I have to say. This is a really good story and for once I totally like in what way you made Jou to be the slut in this. With himself doubting that side of his, it gets pretty realistic. And I also like the feelings you can see Seto developing, without him actually admitting to them. Love the role his PA and Mai play as well. Keep it up, I want to read more! :D

Really really enjoying this! Can not wait for the next chapter!

ognmfrusj*foams at mouth* i was so excited to see the update! i always get so excited when i see a new one up. i have a grand total of three authors i look forward to on a near daily basis. i cant wait for the next one.. well ill try

Okay, I'm aboard now. I've gotten more than tired of the over-done Joey-is-a-whore-and-Seto-buys-him, but you managed to save it from becoming just that. I really like the story, they're both really well-done, and I LOVE Mai in the story. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Seriously diggin' this story! Love Jou's 'split' persona. Love Seto - I knew he was going to go overboard! You keep writing, I'll keep reading! SerenaJ

I'm enjoying this story. Neither of them seem to be ready to accept what they actually want. I don't have a lot else to say, but I shall eagerly await the next part. :)