rate_review Reviews

So as for my first comment, you have me interested thus far I will admit that. I also like the romance beginning to bloom. However, I feel as if this story is being rushed towards a certain direction that I feel should have been apparent by now. Overall the story feels like it's being rushed as if the entirety of what I read was a prologue. In addition, their was the few scenes where they are in the subconscious and when they watch Eragon, otherwise the story feels like it's sort of fast paced repeating season one. I hope to see some larger branching off in the future in order to set this story apart as an entity of it's own. In all honesty I would not mind if you made it a story about the signers fighting something else. I would rather not have Goodwin involved otherwise it would feel entirely like the first season. In addition. I am hopeful of having some adult situations near the future considering the nature of this site. I think with the stream of energy and the subconscious dreams this story has potential. Just hoping to see what it becomes. Update soon

Hey. I just read your fic and I am actually impressed! I like it a lot and hope that you can update it. A suggestion would be please dont spoil the readers. Lol. I find that a turn off. This person is dead and in bracket not dead. You could keep it in. Also, i think your fic belongs in fanfiction.net instead cause i have yet to see lemons. Or do you plan to incorporate it in soon?
But anyway, keep it up and update it as soon as you can. ;)