that was really great ! Please write more for these two , maybe a sequel for this?
Please write chapter 2 while they're in asuka's room , you are really good writer
this was great,can you write yuya asuka again please? maybe yuya wants to have it with yuzu she refuse and he goes for asuka
ABSOLUTELY GREAT CHAPTER, I'm truly HAPPY that this is not ANOTHER FUCKING GAY
YU-GI-OH! STORY, please please write chapters about the bracelet girls and sayaka and also group sex with all six girls, I hope you update soon.