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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was very good nvery good for your first lemon
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT, AWESOME!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW!! For a first lemon, that was really good!!! Good story!!! :)
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ive just read your fanfic, its way ok, i loved the yami/yugi pairing, i love those two , there so cute together.. ahem a bit wooed out here, thats my word for a (slight blush) , well done, really nice. i love yami/yugi parings, ive read a few and this one is a good thumbs, up . it was beautiful and you could really feel the passion in the fic, well done..
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yo...you lie. YA!!! THATS A LIE!!! No way in HELL THAT WAS LEMON 1 FOR YOU! []I only am jelous my first wasn't as good...not that I ever posted it...I think I was 11 so I know it wasn't good[] Oh...and dont beat your self up because you think your no good...you r...and anyway...it's kind a depressing.................KEEP WRITING OR I WILL BE FORCED TO HUNT YOU DOWD EAD EAT YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *_" v cuteness........
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That totally ruled! I personally thought it wound up much better than mine anyways ^_^ And exactly why hasn't this been properly published on fanfiction eh? -_^ I'm sure more people would find it that way!
At any rate, great story! You seem to be a natural for writing this sort of thing, so keep it up!
At any rate, great story! You seem to be a natural for writing this sort of thing, so keep it up!
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June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me-Holy shit. That was good.
Beta-A lemon? Holy crap. That was good!
Me-Me likies!! It good!
Beta-YES!! Lemon!! lemons rock!!
Me-WE likes!
Beta-A lemon? Holy crap. That was good!
Me-Me likies!! It good!
Beta-YES!! Lemon!! lemons rock!!
Me-WE likes!
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June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellant try at your first lemon. They can be tricky, especially yaoi ones, but t jot job!