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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovw the fic what took U so long to update :-( oh well this chap made up for it cant wait till U'er next bye
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.o
I love the story. Always felt sorry for Yami being left on the outside, but...well, this is definitely a new development. I like the interactions between the characters and I am soooo interested in how the whole Yami/Setau/Jadja triangle works out.
The only problem I have is the switches between tenses in this last chapter. I didn't see it when I read the other chapters. First it's present tense, then past tense, then back to present. It's enough to pull me out of the story and go, "Huh?"
I love the story. Always felt sorry for Yami being left on the outside, but...well, this is definitely a new development. I like the interactions between the characters and I am soooo interested in how the whole Yami/Setau/Jadja triangle works out.
The only problem I have is the switches between tenses in this last chapter. I didn't see it when I read the other chapters. First it's present tense, then past tense, then back to present. It's enough to pull me out of the story and go, "Huh?"
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice! very steamy! keep it up. . . bed time now. . .
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August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After you reviewed my fic, I had to do the same for you. Despite a similar idea, trust me our fics are quite different. I can hardly wait to see how yours is going to go, though!
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice ficcy! Tho MB and I don't go for Seto X Jou pairings much, but this one was pretty cute and nicely done. Bakura's always a naughty villian isn't he? Please have more Bakura, he's my and MB's favorite:D
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey its great more please!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shadow: =>.<= UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T I'LL...... I'LL...... I'LL DO SOMETHING!!!
Manty-Chan: Shadow! Don't threaten authors that's not nice!
Cat: =^.^;;= sorry about Shadow, she get's a little worked up! Shadow is like my yami and Manty-Chan is like my hikari. This story is awesome! I can't wait to read more! And I hope you update soon! Joey, submissive (sp?) to Seto, weird, but fun to re Oh, Oh, how do you prenouse Joey's past name? I can't figure that out. I can't wait to read your next chapter, so update soon! Or else Shadow is going to hunt you down and force you to write more! ::Gives Jadej.j cookies for such an awesome story::
Manty-Chan: Shadow! Don't threaten authors that's not nice!
Cat: =^.^;;= sorry about Shadow, she get's a little worked up! Shadow is like my yami and Manty-Chan is like my hikari. This story is awesome! I can't wait to read more! And I hope you update soon! Joey, submissive (sp?) to Seto, weird, but fun to re Oh, Oh, how do you prenouse Joey's past name? I can't figure that out. I can't wait to read your next chapter, so update soon! Or else Shadow is going to hunt you down and force you to write more! ::Gives Jadej.j cookies for such an awesome story::
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! I don't know if my last review made it though. If it did, well, then you now have two reviews from me! ^_^ I hope you update soon! I can't wait to read more! Are the others going to be in it, such as Yugi? And how can you leave us hanging like that!!!???!!! Update soon!!! ::gives Jadej.j cookies for such an awesome story:: I love Ancient Eygpt fics!!! Especially Seto and Jou stories!!
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July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Take that bakenmut. They are on to you. I hope he isn't able to hurt joey. I wonder how yami will handle seto being with another. He is acting all calm and stuff but i know he is jealous. I just hope he doesn't take it out on joey. Poor kid doesn't need more pros ors or enemys. I think yami is confused right now, about how he feels. Anyway, i hope you update soon. Take care, ja!