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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story!! i hope you someday decide to finish it...
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOREMOREMOERMOER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT WAS SO FUNNY!SEPSHALY CAP#7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU'ER WORKING ON THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!RYOU IS SOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!! SO ANYWAY AWSOM JOB!KEEP IT UP!!
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August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You seem to have a minor problem with homophones, which a thorough beta reader should be to to help you with. Other than that, this is pretty good so far and I look forward to reading the rest. :-)
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As I've said before, this is a great fic! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more!
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good story. write more. definitely a ned ord original take on the yami/hikari thing, which is rare. I vote for more yami/yuugi! I really like how you wrote Ishtar..."the Ishtar's Shiny Stuff collection" had me in stitches for a minute. keep on with it, or i'll be sad to take it off my bookmarks...i wanna know how it ends!
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaah~! Noo~! Ryou-chan! *glomps him*
^_^ More more~! I love this story. It's so interesting. *glomps Bakura and Ishtar* They're fun! Banter is fun. Shiny things... *giggles*
^_^ More more~! I love this story. It's so interesting. *glomps Bakura and Ishtar* They're fun! Banter is fun. Shiny things... *giggles*
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July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really like this story. a little confused though. white light hearing other peoples thought etc. hee hee for some reason i feel sorry for ryou. so did grandpa*can't sp his name* ever come back to life or what? and how is bakura supposed to help him? how is yami supposed to help him? i was wondering why yami was his grandson but now it makes sence. hmm i wonder what happened to bakura. well i could go on and on but i figure i should spare you from that torture. i hope you keep updating. this story is fun to read. besides now i want to know whats going ot happen.*sniff sniff* now i'm hooked. hate when that happens.
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ne, you're posting here too? Good plan, good plan. I should do that, too, but never got around to doing it... Not to mention just plain writing. *sigh* Ah well, you keep writing, 'k?
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is fabulous, and i cant wait to see where you go with it, keep it up!
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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HIKARI!!!!! I am so excited!!!!!!!! yay! you finally have it posted on adultfanfiction!! wahoooo!! and of course, i have a list of japanese words you can use, although they aint so common. i have deranged things like, 'HELL YEAH!!' and 'you are so un-cute' (which, by the way, i got from ranma 1/2) and all kinds of entertaining jazz like that so i'll just email it to you, okies? na, ja ne, for now, and DONT FORGET THE PLAN!!!!!