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for My Ocean Love

by Yamiyugikun

person Nocturne22
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... What aa ending!!! A little odd but still quite good!!!!!!!!!!!
person Elle King
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Even though the islands are pronounced Ha-vai-ee (w sounds like v, a has a short sound, just say the "vai" part really fast), it's spelled Hawaii, or Hawai'i (if you want to spell it the Hawaiian way). I live on Hawaii (on O'ahu), so I know. ^_^
person Neko Jounouchi aka Jams
schedule July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Seto Plushie: Oh what a bunch of corny mush!!
Jams: ::thwacks Seto Plushie with frying pan:: It was not!
Neko Jounouchi: Yeah it was sweet..... I'm still a li'l wigged out about the pairing though...
Jams: ::raises frying pan in warning::
Neko Jounouchi ^.^U ::sweatdrop:: But it's still a good story! Keep up the good work! I'm gonna go hide now!
person Exotica
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. That was sooo sweet! I love this story even though I usually hate this pairing, for some reason I don't.... Great job!!! I wuv you yamiyugikun!!!
person Neko Jounouchi aka Jams
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Aww how sweet! ^.^
Neko Jounouchi: Me and Mako...? Hmm... Interesting.
Seto Plushie: Never seen THAT before.
Jams: So? It was still good. Very cute! ^^ And a very unique pairing.
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It frightens me, just how easily you managed to crawl into Mako's head. Very nice descriptions of the sea. Brownie points for being the first person (that I know of) to write this pairing.
person KK^_^
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great job you did with Mako's personality. When I first saw the summary, I was shocked. I've never seen this pairing before, and this was a perfect first one for me! Thanks for posting it for all of us to read!
person Kitt
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sap :D *licks*
person bia-chan
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute!!! More please *puppyeyes*? I loved the pairing!
person Hyatt Insomnia
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wow, someone beat me to writing this.

Jade: That's because you procrastinate...

. *mumbles about the evilness that is my wife* Anyways, that was quite good. I loved to death. I swear the first time I saw their duel episodes I thought they were going to kiss. It looked like they were going to lean in and do it…then they didn’t. I was quite depressed! That's okay... this is far much more interesting then it would be in the show anyways. Um, second chapter soon...onegai?

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