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for With You

by MagicReeni

person Araki
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^.^ vonderful story! when ist the next time you are going to update, make it soon....
person vmr
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think your lemons are just fine. Look forward to the next chapter.
person Brina
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I really like the story. ^_^ I could give you helpful hint on what to put in the lemon for ya. Just send me an e-mail and i'll get back to you. I hope you be writing more than one sex scene. ^_^ I want see the others in action. Well, update soon. ^.^ Later.
person KC
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aw, update soon ok! i really, really want to see what happens next. Especially in FF.net, update that one also!!! I wanna see what... "aibou!" What Yami? "be patient!" *sighed* Yes master. "that has a nice ring to it, Master Yami" *groans* Don't even think about it! "aibou" What? "your review?" Oh, please update this one and in FF.net, CONTINUE TO WRITE!!!
person QueenV
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaah~! I love this story! ^_^
Poor Yugi-chan. *smacks Yami with a two-by-four* Remember DAMMIT!
Yami: *rubs his head* Oww.... X_x
^_^ Aanyways, I'm loving this story. It's such an interesting idea~! And Bakurau isu is my *favorite* pairing in the whole world! (followed closely by Seto/Jou but that's not the point!) ^_^
I'm looking forward to lots more! Angst is good. Smut is good too... *shifty look* I'm mean what?
Bakura: Baka hentai...
Aaw.. I love you too Kura-chan! *glomps* ^_^ Ja~!
person IYYASHI
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: *Gasp* OMIGOD!
Yumi: What?
Yuji: SO cool!!
Yumi: Ok...
Yuji: You gotta update you just gotta!!
person Chibi-inu
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh... o.o
person anonymous
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
loved da story pleeze rite mo it wuz weal coo. i can't wait for da nxt chappies -_- neither can ma cuzin

:P
person jewelcryer
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is so fucken great but why did you have to hurt joey and send the yamis back to egypt and make them forger there promise and can you plz hurry up and finish
person IYYASHI
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Yes!! This is good!!! Poor, poor Yugi his heart is breaking!!
Yumi: My question is...HOW can SOMEONE be bored wit a PLEASURE SLAVE???!!
Yuji: B/c stupid somewhere in Yami's heart he still remembers and loves YUGI!!
Yumi: That still sounds crazy
Yuji: *Sigh* Ok I say you should put a lemon in it! What be funny is if when Yugi goes to the past Eygpt...now this is just a thought...that Yami make him a pleasure slave that'd be funny! Or you can do it however you want I was just thinking
Yumi: Maybe then Yami won't be so bored
Yuji: I meant it in a way so Yugi and Yami can be together without all of Eygpt making a big deal! That was just disgusting of how you meant it!
Yumi: What Yami wouldn't be so bored is Yugi was his little pleasure slave!
Yuji: I'm not hearing this
Yumi: Hikari you gave me the idea
Yuji: Whatever! Update both of these fics I'm reading the seqeal and I'm very impatient I'll cry!
Yumi: She will you know it!

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