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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love stories that talk about Yuugi's past. I wish the manga or anime would elaborate on his parents' whereabouts.
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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good i liked it except that the fact that ittlittle YUGI was hurt but other than that I luv it YAMI&YUGI were together and that's all that matters!!!!^___^
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say this was much better this time, you took the time to flesh out the story and it came out very well.
One thing bugs me, I didn't like how Yami seemed to disreguard Yugi's nightmares. This was something that was really bothering him and I think he'd be a little worried, simply because Yugi seems to attract weirdness, and it could be something to do with the Shadow Magic.
Anyway I hope you decide to touch upon some of the other issues mentioned in this fic, and I happy that your ear infection wasn't nearly as bad as poor Yugi's and that you did your homework on that.
I hope to see more of your fics.
Icz
One thing bugs me, I didn't like how Yami seemed to disreguard Yugi's nightmares. This was something that was really bothering him and I think he'd be a little worried, simply because Yugi seems to attract weirdness, and it could be something to do with the Shadow Magic.
Anyway I hope you decide to touch upon some of the other issues mentioned in this fic, and I happy that your ear infection wasn't nearly as bad as poor Yugi's and that you did your homework on that.
I hope to see more of your fics.
Icz
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww, cuteness!
I'll add that my inner JouxYugi fan was laughing like crazy at his comment in the recent SJ. I guess subtlety isn't Jou's strong point....
Icz
I'll add that my inner JouxYugi fan was laughing like crazy at his comment in the recent SJ. I guess subtlety isn't Jou's strong point....
Icz
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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears* I read this fic and was astonished. This is very realistic. Its beautiful. It dealt with Yugi's tormeted childhood....awww I want to hug that chibi! Please update soon!
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was sad & the doc. was perverted ina way and a chibi yugi is sooooooooo sweet
please finish i want to no what he tells he ji-chan
please finish i want to no what he tells he ji-chan
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Little Yugi is just too cute! I can just picture him, with his blanket and his tiny thumb in his mouth. ^_^ (Of course, I'd really like to kill his father... Grr.) Thank goodness for Grandpa and Yami...
In other words, good story. ^_^
In other words, good story. ^_^
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I. Need. More. CHAPTERS!!!!!! *dies*
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If I can work out something better, I'll redo it - but I knew if I kept screwing around with it, I'd never finish the story at all. Better to get it out and see exactly where I went wrong. (Right now both of my beta readers aren't around - darn vacations...:-)
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July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was kind-of a weak ending. I think you could have developed the story more, but for a first attempt at something like this it was pretty good.