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by ladymadrigal

person Chiii
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaawwwwwwww..... That's so sad, and cruel! *sniffle* Poor Yugi! Please update soon! I NEED to know what happens next!
person Jadesaber
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yuugi! I feel so sorry for him. I hope you post more soon! I want to see what happens when he tells Yami about what happened.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: AAAWWW...*huggles Yugi*
DD; Holy crap! That WAS bad.
YD: Please update soon!!
person Jadesaber
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly an interesting first chapter. I hope you write more. This looks good so far. The only thing I noticed that you might want to fix in future chapters is when Yuugi was thinking about his mother. You wrote okaasan-san. Okaasan is already the proper name and already has -san in it. It's redundent to write -san again after it. Just thought you should know. Anyway, hope you post more soon!
person Tegasus
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I like! More please!!!
person Chibi-Inu
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wah!!!! So sad! Hurry up and continue! And more YxY fluffy tidbits!


By the way... do ya wanna join my Yu-Gi-Oh Yaoi group? ^^;; the address is

h//ww//www.groups.msn.com/YuGiOhTheMysteriesWithin/

person Icz
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Poor Yugi, make me glad my ear infections were never that bad.

I'm interested to learn more about Yugi's past, I was hoping you'd follow up when it was mentioned in COoTD.


Icz
person riskygamble
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi! I certainly hope YOUR ear infection wasn't this bad... ;_;
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: OOOOOOOOOO
DD: Ditto!
YD: Poor Yugi...
DD: It's amazing the things that happen when you have a fever.
YD: Post more soon!!

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