Reviews for Memories Should be Treasured - Yu-Gi-OH

person Im Sterblich Vampir

schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM

omg! that was soooo cute. i loved the entire story as well as the story before this one. so kawaii at parts!

person Yaoi Loving Anzu Fangirl

schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM

It wasn't really a bad set of stories. I've seen a whole lot worse. It was the portrayal of Anzu that irritated me. The AU nature of the story explained certain things, such as Bandiith ith being old enough to *be* Yami's stepfather (though I suppose that's not a big stretch, in canon he's at least in his 20s), but while I could see shades of the originals in most of the characters, Anzu was simply nothing more than your own character, painted with a canonical name and faint appearance. She's not a whore. She's not a slut. Yami and Yugi both consider onr one of their dearest friends. She's always been there when they need her, and she's risked her life multiple times for those she cares about, and even a few times for those she barely considers friends, such as Mokuba. Fangirl hatred strikes me as the actions of an immature child, not someone clever enough to create an alternate world that works like this one can. Her over the topness really ruined parts of the story for me. Where some of the actions rang as true storytelling, hers rang much more as "grr, I hate this person with tits so I am going to make them as stupid as I can, for no other reason than that." It saddens me. Other than that, it was an interesting set of fanfiction, though there were still some plotholes, such as Yugi's miraculous cure from his bulimia/anorexia in less than a year. And given the closeness Yugi has to everyone else in canon, having him so monofocused on Yami was somewhat jarring. He cares for *all* of his friends, and is just generally an open enough person to accept anyone.

These are just my thoughts, however. You are in no way obligated to take them seriously or incorporate any advice into future writings.

person Kitten Girl

schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I really liked the previous story, but this was a good sequel. Nice job! Certainly a 5 star story.

person Frankie

schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM

OMG! That was such a fantastic fic! I'm sorry I missed sooooo much of it but my internet went off line totaly for like four months!!!!!! Anyway, wow! I loved every word and I am so mad that it's you who wrote it and not me! Actualy, no I'm not, I probably would have just screwed it up anyhow! =)p

person IYYashi

schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Yuji: I loved that! I didn't love Yugi and Yami being hurt but oh well
Yumi: *Sigh* Barely any lemons.
Yuji: NO! You just have to continue with With You!!
Yumi: Complain about that another time we're supposed to be telling MagicReeni how good this was!
Yuji: Right! Um This was great! Seriously the plot and the twists were fun! Aside from Keith getting out of jail thing. And almost raping Yami and Yugi again at the same time.
Yumi: Why not just kill him. If cops were there and he was shooting a gun. Cops are allowed to shoot him in return. I mean seriously give him more pain!
Yuji: Right. I'm not that evil so I like that punishments you gave him already
Yumi: Right the fic was great (Even if there wasn't a lot of lemons) and Bye!

person Alina3