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How could you end it there? You are eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil!

Yuji: YUGI!!! How could you do that to Yugi!
Yumi: Damn THat Keith!!! He's a sick bastard!
Yuji: Please update tell Kiore what I sicko her husband is!
Yumi: No tell what a son of a bitch her husband is!!

HOW COULD YOU! WHY! *sobs* how could you do that!....my poor yugi! KILL KEITH DEAD! KILL HIM HAVE HIM GET RUN OVER WITH THE DAMN ABULANCE TRUCK PLEASE!

OMG!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Poor Yugi-kun! And Yami-chan!! Damn Keith.. DAmn him to hell!! *Cries* He had no right to do that Yugi... I swear, if I were in this fic, Jeith would be gone.. but it's not that type of . da. damn.. aw well.. Really good so far though!! ^^ I really hope that sick, twisted bastard gets what he deserves in the end... Really can't wait for the next chapter!! I hope you post it quicker than this last one!! Sayonara!!
~Alina~

YD: No frigging WAY!!
DD: I don't believe it!!
YD: Please update soon!
DD: Keith's toast...the doctors'll know he was raped.
YD: UPDATE!! PLEASE!!

* shoots Keith through the head * that son of a....
poor Yugi!!!! aww youo can't stop here! pleae continue soon!

RD: oh hey red here nice chappy again oh one second please*aims her mages staff at tea and Keith and fires tons of mini balls of raw energy of all the purest and most light filled magic in the world causing tea and Kieth emense amounts of pain the likes of wich niether have seened and continues to torture and fry them with her magic until they know the pain they feel will never way way just like the pain that tea and kieth caused yugi and yami *ah well i feel better oh sry for not showing much attention just giving some punishments to were it is due i mean that bitch is disgusting and she is giving us decent women lilke myself a very bad name grrrr and kieth boy were is the ending for that guy i mean first he steals Joey's entry card to duel in the finals THEN cheats in his duel with Joey and BEFORE that tries to cheat again by locking yugi and his friends inside the cave with the paradox brothers and of course now this this low life really rotten the most worst thing anyone can do boy he reall has no right to call himself a human let alone a man and let alone a duelist sheesh can this guy get anymore slimy or what *opens kieths file and finds it cover in slime of the foulest mixed with other vile toxic and smelly sludges*-__-;;;;;;;;;;; ill take that as a yes he really is a digusting creature really and tea is no better hoy well ^___~ keep up the good work and please continue oh and just one tiny request if u can squeeze it in u dont have to but PLEASE see if u can get bakur and the mally twins to take tea and keith out permanantly please ill wove u for eva and eva and eva if u do pwease*give chibi eyes*but again iust ust a small request u dont have to do it if u dont want to pure and simple well TTFN ta ta for now ^_______~

^^ Awesome!! I'm so happy you decided to make a sequel, I'm just sad that this is the first I've seen of it, u.u" But thats ok, cuz it's awesome so far! ^.~ can't wait for the next chapter! Later!!

I have been hoping for a sequel for so long! since cmad ended in fact! keep it up! didn't yami tell yugi bout keith though? wouldnt he already know he wasn't to be trusted? oh have him die in a car crash!

Yuji: GOD!! I wish that you update this fic quicker! I was asume!! It was cute! K is is a bastard!!!
Yumi: You really hate the bad guys don't you? That's the 2nd time you cursed at the bad guy.
Yuji: But they're just so bad!!
Yumi: Um wouldn't that be the point!
Yuji: Ok don't get so mad!
Yumi: I would with my idiot for a Hikari about your fic it has really gotten better I will wait eternity until you update the next chapter so please don't make me wait that long!
Yuji: Thank you for your nice comment about me *SarcaticallYumiYumi: No problem
Yuji: Make the nexapteapter a lemon!! It would be good!
Yumi: Just update I don't care if it's lemon or not just please update!