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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice fic..... continue, yours is one of my favs
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OKAY WHAT DID I SAY NO MORE RAPE PLEASE ITS KILLING ME SEND THAT DAMN KEITH TO JAIL URGH O_O OKAY PLEAZ i'm beggin ya!
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Keith SO needs to die!
YD: *hits Keith with the lava lamp*
Keith: @.@
YD: *hits Keith with the lava lamp*
Keith: @.@
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Wwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
Yumi: Why are you crying?
Yuji: The author isn't updating quick enough! I want to read more!
Yumi: So?
Yuji: I read this 10 times and the author still hasn't updated! I want to know more!!
Yumi: Is that really a good reason to cry?
Yuji: I've been looking at this fic for the past 5 days waiting for it to be updated! I want chapter 2 already!
Yumi: Please I beg you update quickly or she'll just continue crying. You know how anno tha that is?
Yuji: Wwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Yumi: Why are you crying?
Yuji: The author isn't updating quick enough! I want to read more!
Yumi: So?
Yuji: I read this 10 times and the author still hasn't updated! I want to know more!!
Yumi: Is that really a good reason to cry?
Yuji: I've been looking at this fic for the past 5 days waiting for it to be updated! I want chapter 2 already!
Yumi: Please I beg you update quickly or she'll just continue crying. You know how anno tha that is?
Yuji: Wwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you are an evil person (in a good way) i love the start of this sequel, and i loved the first one, literally could not sign off aol cause i was engrosed in it. I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! That might sound more intimidating if i didnt use them myself. I reeeeeally want you to write more soon, poor yugi, poor yami! -.- dang bandit keith, i hate him. i didnt mind him in the t.v. show, but now i hate him. keep up the good work and may 1,863 inspiration giving fairies tapdance on your brain.
laters,
~jade
laters,
~jade
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, I liked Changing Makes A Difference to. There both really good. I hope to RA you update soon. and Never stop righting please. ^_^ Well I got to go, but I'll be back soon. Bye byez, ja ne.
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiya
LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEEDDDDD The first and was waiting very vey impatiently for the sequel...and being impatient with a semi permanent chocolate high is very very hard and tiring when you run out of chocolate!
Anyways...I can't wait to read more....you are really good at writing your fanfictions and I ( and the others crowding around me ) applaud you.
FayeBlaque
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is really good! I hope you will continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was both hoping for and fearing a sequel, and here it is. Thanks for scaring me! ^_^;;
Anyway, this is a great first chapter. I hope you continue soon, analsoalso hope that Yugi doesn't actually get too messed up from Keith.
Oh, and hey, it'd be kind of humorous/deserving if Yugi was in the library and Keith advanced on him and Kiore heard him and got all mad at him and slapped him or something. Yep. Deserving indeed.
So, yeah, this is the end of this review. Keep the chapters coming, this story has had a cool idea so far. Mro! ^_~
Anyway, this is a great first chapter. I hope you continue soon, analsoalso hope that Yugi doesn't actually get too messed up from Keith.
Oh, and hey, it'd be kind of humorous/deserving if Yugi was in the library and Keith advanced on him and Kiore heard him and got all mad at him and slapped him or something. Yep. Deserving indeed.
So, yeah, this is the end of this review. Keep the chapters coming, this story has had a cool idea so far. Mro! ^_~
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July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like but pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee dont have him hurt yugi i couldnt bare it! *cries* anyway um can you make keith get killed or something like thrown off a damn bus you know?? urgh i hate him! but continue! ^_^x