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IY: I loved it, it was cute! It was so cute when little Yugi and Yami cuddle!
Yumi: Why do you always call everything cute?
IY: Because everything is cute!
Yumi: *Sigh* To believe your I'm your yami
IY: My yami's cute!
Yumi: Just tell her what you thought!!!
IY: It was cute! but Keith was so uncute! he should go to a also uncute jail!
Yumi: Say a sentence without cute!
IY: Say pwetty pwease!
Yumi: NO! I agree with the idiot though. Your writing is very good and your fics are exellent. You have great talent you should update quiker. Oh and please add a Seto/Joey thing those are starting to get me as a good pairing. So maybe if it ok add a Seto/Joey?
IY: Say pwetty pwease!
Yumi: *Sigh* Pwetty Pwease?
IY: Yaayyy! Bye Bye hope you update soon. Bye Bye
Yumi: I don not enjoy Bye Bye so c ya

Jams: SQUEE!!! A sequel!!!
Neko Jounouchi: Yay!! ^.^
Seto Plushie: >.> Oh goooody.....
Jamhis his time ya GOTTA put a Seto/Jou lemon in it.... Even if it's a small one.
Neko Jounouchi: Say "Pretty pretty please"
Jams: Pitty pitty peas!! ^____^

RD:hey Red here and that goes double for me my friend that Kieth is a no good lieing despicalble bastard HE HAS NO RIGHT TO WEAR MY FLAG ON HIS DISGUSTING HEAD LYING ON THAT PUTRID HAIR OF HIS HOW DARE HE TAINT MY FLAG WITH EVEN HIS FILTSENSSENSNE HE GIVES US DECENT AMERICANS A VERY BAD NAME GRRR KEITH*takes out the pole normally used to put the american flag up*U LIKE THE FLAG SO U MUCH HUH U LIKE TO DIRTY IT UP LIKE TO TRASH IT HUH WELL TAKE THIS KEITH*takes that pole and wacks him in the head with the pole* *wack*wack*wack*wack*wack*wack*wack*wack*HOW DO U LIKE AMERICA NOW KIETH NOT SO FUN WHEN SHE HATES U NOW IS IT I SWEAR KEITH IF I EVER CATCH U WEARIN OUR FLAG EVEN IF ITS A BANDANA IF I EVER CATCH U WEARING OUR COUNTRIES COLOLL RLL RIP YOUR HEAD CLEAR OFF YOUR SHOULDERS SO U CANT WEAR IT ANYMORE CAPICE GRRR U FILTHY LOW LIFE STAY AWAY FROM YUGI OR THATS JUST GOING TO MAKE ME EVEN MORE ANGRY U SLIMY BASTARD GRR U HAVE NO RIGHT TO CALL YOURSELF A MAN LET ALONE A HUSBAND AND A FATHER HECK EVEN BEING CALLED A HUMAN IS TO DECENT FOR U *takes the pole and wacks keith even harder until he is unconcous*oh GET UP U WIMP U CAN DISH OUT PAIN BUT U SURE CANT HANDLE IT CAN U GRRR BLACK RED DRAGON TAKE CARE OF HIM FOR ME PLS MAKE HIM PAY IM TOO ANGRY RIGHT NOW WITH HIM
BRD:ok with pleasure im just as angry as u are RD trust me oh hey author nice ficcy i know RD would say the same but as u can tell she is quite angry with keith*Hears a scream of anger and a scream of agony from an awakened keith * ::Sweatdrops::ok well i guess she gets pretty angry when bothe yugi is hurt or our country is insulted he she is highly patriotic but she is very open to any person she just cant stand it when someone makes a mockery of our country cants say i blame her in this case*hears more screams of pain and RD saying"take this keith*wack*and this and that and this and that and THIS(wacks him hard in the face damaging haw)saw)serves u right u bastard u son of a !##!@$@$$##^!$!#~#$$ GRRR STAY THE $@!$ HELL AWAY FROM MY COUNTRY AND YUGI U !@#@@$#$@#$!@*O_O;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; my goodness ive never heard her cuz before ^____^ im so proud my litte RD is growing up oh hey save some for me RD*goes over and starts tormenting keith as RD s bas back to talk to the author*RD:hey again sry for taking so long im just really angry if u havent noticed GRR >_<*has a muscle vain poping in the corner of her head to show her anger well like BRD said i really like this fic dont get me wrong with my anger im just ticked off with keith hoy well ^________________^ keep up the good work hope to read more and hope u make keith pay severly mabye well that is if yami has the abliity ooooooooooooh oh oh oh oh why didnt i think of this sooner yes this is perfect if yami cant send keith to the shadow realm then bring the Marik twins and ba ina into the situation OOOOOOOOHHHHHH KEITH WONT KNOW WHAT HIT AND WHEN HE DOES MAN IS HE GOING TO REGRET HURTIN YAMI AND THREATENING YUGI OOOOOOOHHHH I LOVE IT HEY BRD DID U HEAR THIS IDEA OF MINE*looks ovre at BRD*BRD:how could i not i am a dragon u know i can hear u but yeah great idea i hope the author takes it cuz that ought to take care of keith defenetly like now*snaps fingers/claws and summons marik malike and bakura who aid her in tormenting Keith who continues to scream cned ned with evil laughter from the four of them" mwahahahahahahaha"*RD: MWAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEH OOH IM SO EVIL EVIL I TELL U EVIL well righteous evil but evil none the less MWAHAHAHA well keep up the work TTFN ta ta for now B,M,YM,BRD:TTFN ta ta for now mwahahahah

RD: *huff*huff*huff*there that takes care of him*puts the pole down she used earlier to hurt keith aka the low life bastard*oh hey this is just an idea of mine i had while i was tormenting keith umm author would u mind getting bakura and marik and malike involved particularly when he gets his punishment for hurtin yami and pls dont dont DONT LET HIM COME NEAR YUGI I LOVE THAT SWEET LITTLE ANGEL AND WILL NOT SEE HIM HURT EVEN BY HIS BEST FRIENDS EVEN IF IT WAS AN ACCIDENT AND THE SAME HOLDS TRUE FOR YAMI umm well like i was asking earlier could u maybe think of adding those three it would make my day really well to see that bastard get what he deserves in the hands of not only yami but three of the most wonderfully sadistic char ive ever known oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh keith would get it then oh he would he would he would *glomps Marik malike and bakura*i WUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUV UUUUUUU guys ive thought id be saying this but your tough guy additude could be just what keith needs heheh well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^_____________________________________________________________________^ oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh im so happy with this idea of mine i really hope u take my idea it really would make me happy it realy u would *act like kel from kinen fand kel* who loves marik malik and bakura i do i do i do ooooooo hehe

DD: YEAH! SEQUEL!!!
YD: Damn Keith! Man! He SO needs to be "unmanned"!
DD: "Unmanned"? *snicker*
YD: *rolls eyes* Okay, fine. He needs his balls ripped off with a pair of rusted pliers!
DD: *glomps YD* That's my yami!!

This is good so far. Is thtorytory going to be as long as the first one? Poor Yuugi. I hate Keith too! He's such a creep! Anyway, post more soon!

Awesome! I loved this little fic! Its already becoming angsty! Damm Keith! No good damn man...>< Update!! Onegai!