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RD: oh by all means Ryoko keep up the great work and if Malik Girl gives you a hard time u just send her over to me and me and my beloved dragond Hyozanryu REBD and Veeshan would more then happy to welcome her amoung my special guests hehe and you'll be happy to know that from several other stories ive learned not to bash an author for just simply writing what they feel and that i should take it out on those that are supposed to deal with that kind of thing so to make my point on the chappie pegasas has his way with yugi lets just say ill return the favor same for bakura cuz as much as i like that yami cuz i love all the yamis and hikaris to death i will not see yugi most of all hurt wich reminds me *punches bakura in the face sending him flying into a wall* THAT FOR MAKING A MOCKERY OF MALIK KURA hehe see case in point i didnt hurt your feelings did eye and the only thing i on him i damaged *jerks her head towards that dazed bakura* is his ego wich will heal all to soon and same will happen to pegas if i catch him hurting yugi ryou or malik cuz trust me ill fight claws and fangs to keep the hikaris safe trust me same for the yamis except maybe not as harshly cuz lets face those three can take care of themselves QUITE well oh and on small thing if in any of ur upcomming chapters u happen to involve yami in the means of hurting/humiliating him in ways that i do not approve of (cuz no offense but it seems u lean more towards in Mariks favor) just warn me ahead of time ok cuz amoung all the yami hikari pairings im most fond of yugi and yami so i might get angry at you again if i were to see that said kinda chapter and i dont want to do that to u cuz like i said before its just how u want to write it and thats fine just warn me is all ok so i can skip it thank u and again keep up the great work and update soon JA NE ^__^ heh and sry for the long review i know i did it again hehe

wow, it's beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love marikXyugi and malik is a good slave!!!!!!!! but yami? i am italian! my english is so so.... can you finish this story?

RD:well i liked that chappy oh and could u be as so kind as to tell me when your going to do pegs/yugi that way ill just skip over the part i dont like ez and when is yami going to make his grand entrance i mean i know he and marik arent exactly lovey dovey with each other and even getting them just to smile at one another with no smirking involed is as ez breathing several thousand feet underwater without any sub or oxytanks but still he probably had his fare share of exp with slaves in the past so he does no a few things in that dept and i know this is going to sound weird but i just think it would be cool if yugi gets a visit from the egyptian god cards u know just to see how pegsy marik and bakura would react knowing little yugis got the big boys watching his back hehehe call me crazy but i just like the thought of those three powerful monsters watching out for there young master hehe i saw it on the yugioh movie when they cut cut off from yugi they tried to get to him all three of them tried to get to him smashing into the pyramid of light it be neat to see them do something like that just once then id be very happy well keep up the superp job Ryoko hope to read more of your fine work TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^___^

I'm sorry to be so critical, i don't have any problem with any kind of fanfiction and you are a very talented writer. However i found your story to monosylabic in the way that all they ever did was fuck and do slave things, the story didn't go anywhere and you seemed to put yugi into it to easily. i mean he was ment to be all innocend tnd then nealy strait away without any real punishment he became obideant i would hope that you could re-write this and dont take this the wrong way every good writer has to face some cructructive crittisism and i dont meane to imply that you are in any way a bad writer.

Oh, please update soon. This story is so good. This is the first Yami No Malik/Yugi story I've read, sorta. Is Yami gonna be in this one?

This story was actually reccomended to me by a friend and after reading the first 3 chapters i beat her ass for it. I decided never to read this fic again buuuttttt i don't know your story just entangled me and i kept coming back with interest. Now i tell everyone of my friends about you and i must say i admire you greatly. I guess thd sad saying is true never judge a book by it's cover. You and me are alike in alot aways, i just didn't see it till now.

Anyways your story was so hype that influenced my lunch group at school. Everytime my physics teacher talks about friction he says lubrication and something else comes to mind *grins*
He had to send one of my friends outta the class when she started to laugh uncontrollably.
So thanks,
Yours Truly
Ferocity

P.S. when are we gonna see bakura /yugi?
Continue plz

im like in love with the ff ^_^ so far i like the yami/yugi better but i like it all ^_^ update soon

See i dont give many reviews but i just have to say that this story is THE BEST ONE I HAVE READ SO FAR SO PLZ CONTINUE IT if you dont ill cry i swear this is a great strory and i would like to see it continued passed chapter ning plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Other wise id have to read the same thing over and over and that would get boring thats how much i love this story plz finish it plzzzzz

yay!!

you updated!!

i really liked this chapter, i liked ryou, he's so kawaii!

please update soon

Wow, now this is the kinda story I like. XD Yami Malik/ Yugi has always been a favourcoupcouple of mine, it's so underused. Best thing about this fic is the fact you have a balance of het and yaoi in here. This is rare, most het fans hate yaoi and most yaoi fans hate het. So this is very impressive. *Dances* I loved the way you treated Anzu, even if you do hate her didndidn't bash her about too much, I kinda like Anzu.
I have a request though. My favourite Yugioh character is Shadi and I was wondering if you could bring him into it? Even if it's just for a sentance or so. *Begs* He's so underrated.
If you could do this for me, I'll draw you a fanart or something. lmao! So please. *puppyness eyes*

I'll wait for an update. :3
Belldandirah of http://silver-bell.nu