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RD:hey red here nicee ficcy as always Ryoko its a little bit of a new twist but its better then most ive seened with yugi being dark and loving dark deeds and stuff but this is really good so far id say it holds rank with a few vampy kind of fics were yugi either becomes or falls in love with a vampire but again new twist but likable one and again Ryoko i mean no trouble for ya on the whole peggsy and yugi duo ill just not read the part it gets to i mean the man isnt to bad he does show some honor but really there is a point when one has to draw the line and thats what i do with his actions towards yugi and even Kaiba particularly wih mokuba i mean is that really fair to capture mokubas soul i mean its not like he asked for the role of being kaibas brother but he is none the less and is being a good sport about hehe three cheers for mokuba hip hip horay hip hip hip horay hip hip horay hehe well keep up the good work ryoko oh and if Maliks girl keeps up the additud just ask me id be happy so let her see what a red dragon can REALLY DO hehe well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW

Grrr... I couldn't review because this website had some problems. ^^; Anyways, you got a great chapter here! Looking forward to the Pegasus/ Yugi chapter for some odd reason. I am a nutcase! *cheers* Please update!

*Blush* I um....never read any S&M or spanking story like this! *Blushes again* Eh, how many pairings are in this AU?! Is it all yaoi, yuri, straight, or a little bit of both?! (I hate to admit, but I'm a yaoi fan! *Sigh* And I thought it was just shonen-ai...) The Malik/Yugi pairings is my fav. for now, but I might end up liking others so! So, um could you please update? (Even at my age and what I seen, I STILL blush around sex.....)

Dude, you really like Yugi torture don't you? Well, you're not alone I do too. Good fic. Very nicely done. Looking forward to the next chappie!

yay! just got back from vacation and you updated yay yay!
well, once again I will be waiting for anotheappiappie ^_^

I feel like I should apologize here. I had no idea my pairing request would somehow spark a flamewar.

Anyway whatever you decide on doing I'll be happy to read it!


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Waii!! You write really well!! I really liked the Malik/Yugi chapter!! Will you add another chappie? Pwease?? Oh! can I give a suggestion as an upcoming in l cha chapters?? Could you have a Yugi/Mokuba or Mokuba/Yugi? I agree with you about that malik/marik only girl. I believe that she is actually a child and should'nt be here.

Waii!! You write really well!! I really liked the Malik/Yugi chapter!! Will you add another chappie? Pwease?? Oh! can I give a suggestion as an upcoming in later chapters?? Could you have a Yugi/Mokuba or Mokuba/Yugi? I agree with you about that malik/marik only girl. I believe that she is actually a child and should'nt be here.

-_-' I should have reviewed this sooner, but I was away! Anyways I loved this chapter as well! Reading at 9 in the morning with chocolate will damage the brain, but who cares? Hehe, Malik/ Yugi. That was awesome! Anywho...Please update.

P.S: The Yugi/ Pegasus soundes interesting...I'm intrigued. Somwhat odd pairings always lure me in. ^_^

RD:hey Red here and lilke i said before its up to u if u want to put pegasas in *glomps authorress*i still lilke ya even if your going to put yugi with a character i hate most at least when i read that part ill just simply remember that its not true that pegasas never got his hands on yugi befor and and that wonderful sweet Yami intervenes MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA hehehe i love Yami and Yugi but more importantly i love them as a couple pure and simple but uh the malik yugi combo is cute hehe its not like ihavent seened it before a combonation of yugi with malik or yugi with ryou or one of them hehe heck i wouldnt mind seeing a threesome of the three ive only seened ite ane and it was brief highly brief and i gues ireally dont mind pegasas that much i just cant stand the fact that just because he lost his wife that gives him the excuse to be so cruel but he did stop Kieth in the show that much i remember so at least even if he is a big coward and a heartless one at that i guess i can excuse the cruelty out of lonliness and the cowardice well i guess cuz he is a painter he dosnt have that iron heart i guess to just simply understand that sometimes even the ones we love most end up leaving us i mean yes it was unexpected and yes it was harsh but i guess her time was to come sooner then expected and at least at the very least he can know one thing she may have left all to swiftly but she was semi happy since she was about the marry the man she loves so her heart was happy even if her body wasnt so hmm i guess its just how it ended up but ill give him this at least he is still a man of honor if not a man of endurance thats it he has little endurance to withstand the hardships given to us were unlike him yugi and joey have proven themselves opposite of it that though they had to do something they hated more then anything else they proved that they can endure that hardship by believing in themselves and believing that their friendship would see them through there hard times so sry authoress didnt mean to get on your case on pegasas but u can understand my dislike of his additued cant ya i mean its not different then that arcada guy really but here*takes out a huge blue silk drawstring bag*these are for y a t a token of appology for getting on your case lets see*pull out all the items for the authoress*u get two lovely wands/staffs with unlimited powers and a make your own millenium item kit wich enables u to make an item of your own with the powers u like in it of the shape of your choice it can even imitat the original ones well thats all for now TTFN ta ta for now and keep up the good work ^____~