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RD:hey Red here again nice ficcy but again i only have one request u can have yugi with anyone else but pegasa or i wont review anymore nor read or stories understand i will not have yugi with old pegsy besides the mans not even handsome just your average premadona and who wants to have that in their stories unless they are so completly insane the belong in the tightest secruity own shink they have no offense to u author but pls do not have Y/P as a pair it will not work not for me or any other yugi fan who HATES pegasas for what he did to poor yugi well gtg keep up the good work TTFN ta ta for now

heh heh this is one messed up fic and I love it
^_^

Please update soon

this is a very well written story but wheres my Yami-Yuugi
you should make him a slave to he'd be better than yuugi-chan

Oh too short of a chapter.It was good though glad u put mokuba in^.^
-Rai

How can you be flamed about this? really....
anyways, yay! it was good, more :D

RD:hey Rere nre nice ficcy even if i despise yugi getting hurt im a yugi fan so its gets me steamed to watch him hurt but i guess a little masochist in a persons being never hurt anybody and it does seem catchy to have yugi enjoy his harsh treatment even if i think ppl should go gentle then harder and keep the pace even and well sort out before hurting Yugi this much but oh well too late for that now um im not sure who yugi should be with next cuz i mean i cant really see yami doing that to yugi and he hast to be the most sexiest handsomest most charming man ive ever known just as even id say with trunks from DBZ and Leglolas from LOTR and of course Link from Zelda but never in prior history with the exception of one have i seened yami dominate over yugi like that and actually enjoy doing it there is this almost one but after he realizes what he did he kills himself thinking yugi would never forgive him for what he did and in the other well i didnt lilke it too much considering well i just dont like the whole Yami turned evil twisted and vile but hey its just my opinion i only have one request pls u can have him with Marik Isis and i guess Bakura but for the all that is good in this world for the sake of all heavenly things and for the the love of Ra/god pls DO NOT LET PEGASAS ANYWERE NEAR THAT PRECIOUS TENSHI i dont mind bakur isis even Marik but i REFUSE TO SEE HIM WITH THAT TWISTED YELLOW BELLIED FAGET Premadona(not that im saying im against Gay ppl mind u ^__^) ANYWERE NEAR YUGI CUZ ILL KILL I SWEAR TO IT ILL KILL HIM IN FACT IF IT WERENT FOR THE FACT THAT HE IS BEING PLAYED BY LEGOLAS/Orlando Bloom in the NEW YUGIOH MOVIE ID STILL HATE HIM but since that is the case my hate for him has lowered a notch but he is still a sick twisted cowardly bastard well thats all i have for now keep up the good work i hope to read more soon well TTFN ta ta for now and remember KEEP THAT TWISTED PREMADONA FRUIT AWAY FROM YUGI thats all i have to say against this story bye ^_~

^^ Nice chapter. Update soon!

Whoa... this is GOOD. Normally I'd hate a pairing like this (I'm more of the Malik/ra tra type :P), but this is an exception. Turned me on ^_^;;

Yay write more me love this story.Very good chapter
-Rai

Yay! keep themingming! can't wait for more ^_^