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for Forever, My Puppy

by serialcabbit78

person KC
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what? Your so evil!!!! How Could U do that to us? When I mean 'us' i mean the readers. ::Aibou!!!:: *Rolls eyes* oh, back from the park from my 'friends?' *Yami sighed* ::Listen, they were wondering about u also:: Really? *Yami nods* Whatever, u always say that. ::But Aibou! I do worry about u!:: Then how come u didn't invite me, hmm? ::Uh aibou?:: What? ::Your review!!!:: Oh, CONTINUE!!! Your still evil what you did to us hanging us like that!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
person yaoi_nut
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Poor Joey, ;_; Is his dad going to kidnapp him in a later chapter? Oh please continue I need to know what happens!! *big puppy dog eyes*
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: That's so cool that Serenity is there!
YD: Yeah, that should help Joey.
DD: I can't imagine Yugi smoking!
YD: *rolls eyes* You just had one, didn't you?
DD: I'm not a sweet, innocent teenager tho.
YD: You got that right!
DD: Please post the next chappie soon!
person KC
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yes!!! You've updated the story!!! Continue right away!!! ::Aibou!!!:: *Jumps a little* You scared me! Where are u that I don't see u often? *Pouts* ::I'm sorry, i've been busy latley. Your friends invited me to go to the park:: Again? *Nods* Fine, just go with them as u want!!! ::Um, aibou?:: What? ::Your review:: Uh, oh yea! Me and Yami will be rooting for u so don't take that long to go and put up the next chapter!!! *Kisses my forehead* ::I'll be back by seven:: Sure. *Watches Yami leave for the park* Anywayz, continue!!!
person IYYASHI
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Awww that was so cute! Seto is a romantic!!
Yumi: Bringing Joey's sister isn't something what I'd call romantic!
Yuji: It's the thought that counts!!
Yumi: *Sigh* Fine, Hikari, Fine
Yuji: Update I want more!!!
Yumi: Please do
person Jadejj
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Jou's sister there to help him out of his dark moment.
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your story, is so good! ^.^ And whoevers been flaming you can go straight to hell! Anywho... please start chapter 9 ASAP!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: I was wondering why it wasn't ultra painful for Joey.
DD: They REALLY need to kill his dad.
YD: Can I do it?
person KC
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what? Why is it so fucking short? Sorry to be rude, but that was REALLY, REALLY SHORT!!! *rolls eyes* Anywayz, continue, ok? ::Aibou!!!:: What is it Yami? ::Are u being mean to the author?:: Um, no? ::Are u sure?:: Yes!!! ::Very well Aibou:: *goes back to Soul room* WRITE A REALLY LONG CHAPTER!!! UPDATE!!!
person IYYASHI
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Poor Joey!! His father is just terrible.
Yumi: Come on Joey had Seto now
Yuji: Yeah Seto lovoey!oey!!
Yumi: You are happy now right
Yuji: The party was Cute!!
Yumi: See your ha- NO MORE CUTE COMMENTS!!
Yuji: Huh? Why?
Yumi: Cute is starting to get annoying you know
Yuji: Adorable? My Yami is adorable!!
Yumi: I am not
Yuji: This fic is soooooooooo good. More chapters I need more. UPDATE!!
Yumi: UPDATE!

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