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for Forever, My Puppy

by serialcabbit78

person yaoi_manic
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is the kewlest! I think you should give Seto and Jou a little play timr before moving on and maybe include a few kinky toy's ^_~
person KC
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
just go on ahead. Do anything you want, but for sure, don't wait too long to write!!! Anywayz, CONTINUE!!! That major flashback wasn't that bad at all, but please, CONTINUE. I wouldn't mind about jou/seto having some 'fun' that day or night. JUST CONTINUE, WRITE, UPDATE, HURRY PLEASE!!! ::Aibou!!!:: Uh oh, yes, Yami? ::Don't yell at the author!:: Sorry. ::Go back to your soul room:: But Yami... ::I mean it!!! Go, now!!!:: Fine, then! *Went to soul room* ::I'm sorry about her, she's too hyper from drinking too much soda or eating candy I guess. Anywayz, continue, ok? Don't worry about my aibou, i'll make sure she'll be nice to you!:: Continue!!!
person Moon and Blade
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very dramatic and very descriptive. I know Kaiba was a bit mushy but it worked out pretty well. I don't really care for Yaoi fics but this one was actually pretty good. To whoever wrote this, keep it up.
person Dragon\'s Girl
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLAY TIME! PLAY TIME! PLAY TIME!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Awww...cuddly Seto
DD: That was good. I think you should give them some more cuddle .
Y.
YD: Yeah, they should take it a little slow...those ribs need time to heal.
person bakurasgirl
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLAYTIME WITH PUPPY!!!! YEAH FRIENDSHIP! AH! Sorry....

*hands over Joey plushies*
person leaf Zelindor
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-eeeps and hides under a blanket-
Wing: she could care less about the lemon content...she just wanted to see what was going to happen in the next chapter...and now i can't get her out from under the blanket...
-just stays hidden-
~Leaf~
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please e-mail me when you update at bloodyrose2310@yahoo.com
person ThunderWolf
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love the story; i always like stories that concern joey and seto as a couple. joey and seto 4 ever man!
person Demonix
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I FIGURED OUT HOW TO REVI it it is i inga_maximus!! man i didnt think i would have to register. oh well! on with th review!

*pats you on the back*
i know.. ppl can be mean. but restasured i am NOT one of those ppl. i love this story! it kawaii! setoxjou are my fave yugioh couple! ^____^! plz continue this! i gotsta git! so asta till the next chapter!

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