rate_review Reviews

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! you need to continue!!!!!!!!!! and you got Fish a buddy! ^.^ *claps and cheers hooray* i wuv this story. it's just as good if not better than Beachin Trip. I like the Tristan/Devlin thing. hehe, sexy deviln. *drools* purty green eyes......... erm. yea. but you must continue! more more more! i'm very glad Tristan is getting over his scaredy-catness. Will thing's be getting int interesting then? i hope so. CONTINUE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you!

~`*`~Haiku O§owa~`*`~

*smirks* Ah... I think you've made me a Honda/Otogi (Tristan/Devlin) fan now... Can't wait to see when Tristan finally decides to give in totally to the dark sides, and for more than a minute. Can't wait to see what you've got planned next.



Rainy

very good u have talent but not so much seto joey more bakura&royu

yay!!

you updated!!!

poor fishy. at least he has a new friend now

please write more soon!!

i love this fic!!!

Hikari Chaos:*giggles hysterically*Looks like our fav. fishie gots a new *friend*!!!^_^
Yami Chaos:>_Hikari Chaos:I don't act like a two year old!*sucks on her baby blue binkey* ^o^
Yami Chaos:*sighs*See what I haveput put up with.....
Hikari Chaos:*pops binkey out of mouth*Keep up da good work!!^
Yami Chaos:Update soon, ppppwwwweeeaassee!!!!
Hikari Chaos:*puppy dog eyes*

I adore this fic to teeny tinny huggy bits, and love the ><((*> fishes too! Buuut.... I think in one bit we have Joey snuggling with himself, I think. Did ya forget with one of em was Joey? Cos I sure did by the end of it. :D Great fic!

VERY nice, Duke mmm...I bet he looked SO HOT!!!
AWESOME job, love the FISH ^.^!!
UPDATE SOON!!!

Well, that was...interesting! Poor Joey, yep you can feel the love radiating from those too, thar's why I LOVE them SO DAMN MUCH!!!!!!
Plz, More lemons, I need lemons. I think the fish needs to get it on!
UPDATE PLEASE.
LATER...

*Jaw drops* You have just become one of my fav authors on here. I been reading your stuff all evening. Holy crap! It's just say you're so good, I tured down going out for coffee with friends, just to read them. ^_^

ACIDFLOWER

Me: *cheers* GO DUKE!!! BAD BOY!!!
Duke: *out of nowhere* did someone called me???
Yami: koi, i think we should get out of here
Me: but why Yami? I wanna stay!!!
Tristan: *out of nowhere* where am i???
Duke: your a real robotic monkey, dude
Tristan: *looks around and found Duke* I'LL GIVE U SOMETHING TO TALK ABOUT!!! *raises fist*
Yami: *leaves room*
Me: now, now boys. We don't want the author to be upset, now, do we?
Duke: *shrugs* i was only saying that cause he is a monkey in the TV show
Me: *smirk* that is true Tristan!
Tristan: shut up! At least i have a boyfriend which is Duke
Me: yea, well, i have Yami! *looks around* where is she???
Duke: i think she left cause you weren't paying attention to her
Me: *growls* go fuck somewhere else! *whispers to author* those two you can't pry apart, but continue 2 update!!! *leaves room*
Tristan: um, we know that we are in your story, but put "us" in it, will yea? We NEED HOT LEMON GOING ON BETWEEN "US!"
Duke: yea, or we'll kill you if we don't have it in the next chappie!!!
Tristan: come on duke! *picp dup duke* CONTINUE 2 UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPPIE SOON!!! *leaves room*
Duke: HEY, PUT ME DOWN YOU FAGGOT!!! I CAN WALK ON MY OWN!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG SO "WE" WON'T HAO FIO FIGURE OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! CONTINUE!!! *shuts up with a kiss from Tristan*