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for Nobody Lives Happily Ever After

by EVILMJ

person Lkyrn
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! Well thought out and well written. And with very, very few spelling errors! (Something we rarely experienced these days) I love the characterizations! I loved Bones!!! And actual plot! See, people, you can have a plot and great sex scenes (very nicely done by the way). It CAN happ It It has been such a long time since I read a truely intellegent, supenseful story. Thanks for proving that they are not extinct! Only 2 requests -- Write more soon and MORE RYOU!!! Thanks, I feel better now.
person Shadow Sabre
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... This is good, creepy, and original. May I take a stab at who the killer is? I think it might be Anzu/Tea. Didn't you say that she was badly injured in the final duel and had to give up dancing? And isn't the murderer targeting dancers?

I can't wait for the next chapter....

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: *glomps MJ* You're so sick!!
DD: *still drooling over the threesome*
YD: She's been drooling for days. *rolls eyes* Anything with Tris.
DD: *eyes roll back in head*
YD: *hands naked, drugged up Joey* Here ya go!! Great job!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are sick and twisted! I like it, I like it!!!! I can't wait for the rest!!!!

Lady Elfskye!
person Katmon
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*fell off the bed at the relevation that it was Seto-chan, not Yami no Baka, who was using the boy as if he we Yuugi-kun* Gah..... Watashi no baka desu..... -_-*
Wai!!! Great threesome!! ^_^ I knew it was thae! *e! *bounces*
And, poor Jyou-kun.... Maybe he'll enjoy his vacation? *snorts* But, knowing you, it'll be h... ... *hums* What if he visits Tris and Mako, and, uh, what's her face....?! ^_^" I'm trying to write your fic again.....
GAH!!!! *still attempting to figure out the killer* Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa................ -_-* Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevile!!!!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^=/KJ/NG
person Katmon
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Flames give you black spots? Hum.... It always seemed to me like it was a white spot, but, who knows!
And, once again, I managed to read at night, while lil sis was sleeping!! ^_~
*scratches head, blushing slightly* Sorry I didn't review last chappie.... I was getting so good with that, too!! -_-* Internet went out, and I didn't think it was a good idea to be reading this at the public library, although, that mighta been fun.... *smirks* I should try that!! *cackles evilly*
Well, as always, can't wait till next chappie!!! ^_^
Ja!
Katmon =^.^=/KJ/NG
person bakurasgirl
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go JOEY! Gettin' down with Isis!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok! That was truly evil. Yet, oddly addicting! Honestly, I love it! A real good thriller. I have three guesses on who it is. But I ain't saying anything, cause I ain't sure. Hmm, things are about to explode!! Wonderful! Keep em coming, ye lover of evilness!!

Lady Elfskye
person demonwing_12846
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you that this is an awesome story. I am so into it that its not funny, it's actually quite sick. hehe. But then again, I was always the morbid type. I have an idea who the serial killer is, che, you'd have to be a moron not too. And I have a feeling why, but I won't ruin it for everyone else. ^_^

Just write more asap! Can't wait to see more!

Demon-chan
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: HEY! Just WHAT do you think you're doing torturing Tris?! Only WE get to do that!!
DD: I gave her permission a LONG time ago, yami.
YD: *grumbles*
DD: Ok...wrapping the body up in it's own guts is just REALLY gross MJ!
YD: Gross...but good!!

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