rate_review Reviews

good chappie mj...i'm glad you upped the rating on it. This was definitely nc17. Good, though. very good.

Nice, continue soon.

Wonderful lemon. Passionate in just the right ways. And...*smirks*...I didn't need to worry about my sis, it's 1:30am, and she's fast asleep. *giggles*
Barney is on tv? He is? *makes a face* Curses. My plan failed..... *po
*s
*smiles* Go, Mako! *gives victory sign* You know you can do it!! *dances*
*insane look* Pixy Stix good.... lol *winks* Can't wait till next chappie!
Ja!
KK =^.^=/KJ/NG

DD: I wanna change my name to Isis!!
YD: Not if I don't first!
DD: Fight ya for it!
*fight breaks out*

well....the cannibalism chappiue will give me interesting dreams, i'm sure. I tried to read this thremes mes today. It's 11pm and i finally got a chance to read it.

This is such a great murder mystery! I think I have a couple of ideas of who the killer could be but I am still not sure yet. I will just have to keep reading to find out!

Dang, it's dark and I like it! BTW, I just read the first chapter and I'm going to read the next ones. Did I read right that Joey screwed up with Serenity (his sister), which made Mai leave him?

Good dark content - just the way I like it :-D

*is looking slightly green* Uhm.... *coughs* That was.....weird.... *shivers* Fabulous blood and cannibalism. That's best I've seen! (The only, I think.sweasweatdrop*) I'd ask for more(and I have a feeling there will BE more), but....heh....stomach is making odd sounds right now... *smacks said stomach* Stop that! That wasn't so bad! -_-*
I like Joey's "talk" with Moku-kun. Was cute. Especially when Joey decides he's never going to sleep again. Made me laugh. Good thing, too. Gave me a happy outlook before reading the rest. Course, if I read that last part again, I'd be laughing insanely(and NOT eating Kix....) and then my lil sis would come in and.... *shakes head* Okay, note to self: Lock door before reading fic again.... ^_^"
Really? Sex next chappie? *bounces* Yay!! lol ^_^
See ya next chappie!
~KK =^.^=/KJ/NG

YD: GO MJ!!
DD: *runs from room* *gagging heard from bathroom*
YD: That was so....*sigh*
DD: *more puking noises*
YD: Sex in the next chappie? Het or yaoi?
DD: *big cras sas she faints on the bathroom floor*
YD: She has a VERY weak stomach.

Anybody who flames this story has got to be wrong in the head! I'm greatly intrigued, and I honestly have to say that this is one of the best Yu-Gi-Oh FanFictions I have had the pleasure to read. Even though my fav. bishounen aren't in it (yet, I still hold out hope) I'm really caught up in it. Please, write more and update soon. I can't wait to see where this is going.