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YAY YAY YAY! thanks for the next chappie, i've waited a long time for it,
but it was woit! it! please continue soon! You rock!

From the original manga's, it was always said that Yami had been locked inside for 1000 years. No worries about me complaining : ) I'm glad Yugi is okay, Yami is okay and all that stuff. Suicide is never an answer . . . unless you have major faith that there is something waiting for you on the other side : ) Good story.

ha! that was a pitiful excuse for a lemon... aw I'm just kidding. and technically, that was a lime, since there was no hardcore sexual activity, and I dun think blowjobs count as hardcore... ya and my mom just walked RIGHT by o.o;;

keep it up


later days

-anata no imouto

Yumi: Nice lemon.
Yuji: Whaaa!
Yumi: What now?
Yuji: Somebody died and he seemed so nice too. *Sniffle*
Yumi: It's ok
Yuji: *Sigh* So sad
Yumi: Hey Yuji and Yami are together!
Yuji: Your right they're so cute together!
Yumi: Yeah. Wait what have I told you about that word!
Yuji: But it's true!
Yumi: Update if there's more!

Ooooh! What a great story! I really liked it n.n You must write more!
And I'm glad that you didn't let what that evil person said affect you.
You've got a lot of talent, and I say that as a person who thoroughly
enjoyed the story. I thought it was simply fantastic. Great job n____n

i loved this fic and i really wish you would finish it. i thought it was good and that you explaned it well ty very much

i liked dis a lot pweesw wite mo. iz weal coo ya know. waitin for an update

Another intriguing chapter, and a very good one at thAs fAs for your subject choice . . . let me semi quote something I read that a fantasy fiction author once wrote . . .

~Fantasy stories are a way to take real life problems and put them in a more distant and less personal world so that they become comfortable to read. When this is done, often we find that the points that need to be made about said problem are more easily accepted. ~

In other words, don't let the flamer get you down. I happen to be 26, and I don't find the story repulsive or 'wrong' at all. Actually, I think it's a good way of spreading the word to a younger generation (and yes, saying that makes me feel WAY old) that this disease is exactly that . . . a DISEASE, and that it is a serious problem. So keep up the good work. I'll be waiting to read more.

After reading about your critic, I felt compelled to write this review.

This story struck very close to home for me. When I was 16, around the same age as I'm guessing Yuugi is in this story, I found myself in a similar situation. I was being manipulated by a man I cared for. He also used fear & sex to control me and I felt I had no control over my life. So I stopped eating. What I put in my mouth was the only thing, I felt, that I had control over. After a while, anything I did eat refused to stay down.

When the relationship finally ended, I was down to less than 100 pounds. A sad thing for someone who's 5' 10". Though I finally started eating again, it took me years to heal the emotional scars left. Now, 15 years later, I still sometimes struggle with it. But with the help of my husband, my wife and my best friend, it doesn't hurt so much. I'll never go back there again.

I salute you for having the guts to write this story. Your age doesn't matter. You're a very good writer. Eating disorders are a very touchy subject and I think you're doing wonderfully with this.

Thank you.
Mel Cooper

*whining* Why did you stop there!!?? I hope Yami deals severely with those jerks that took our beloved Yugi to that *room*. Bastards....Anyway, great story! I like the conflict you put in...I love Yugi's character very much, and I hope the love we all know Yami feels for him will let him pull through the problems he's having now....update soon! And make sure those bastards(I refuse to call them by name!>_<) get what they deserve!