rate_review Reviews

love the story...the only things that could be worse for Mokuba right now would be if he had a crush on J..or..or both Joey and Seto...and actually tried for it...ooohhh that would realpsetpset Seto (maybe Joey too) :)

Me: *sobs* not yet?
Yami: *hugs me* how could u not update yet?
Me: *angrily* I HATE U!!!
Yami: koi, calm down!
Me: *sniffles* but koi, its been almost a month already!
Yami: really? I haven't notice that!
Me: *sobs* i'll be going *leaves room quickly*
Yami: *glares at author angrily* WHY'D U DO THAT 2 MY AIBOU?! IF U DON'T UPDATE THIS STORY VERY SOON, WE WILL STOP REVIEWING EVEN THOUGH WE R STILL READING IT!!! CONTINUE OR WE WILL STOP REVIEWING!!! *leaves angrily to find me*

*looks at updated date* not yet?
Yami: what's wrong aibou?
Me: Me: i've wrote a review when this was up, and she didn't updated yet for almost a month!!!
Yami: how do u its a she?
Me: *groans* just guessing
Yami: want me to send her to the shadow rhelm?
Me: *puppy dog look* please? it will make me happy.
Yami: anything for u little one.
Me: DON'T CALL ME LITTLE!!!
Yami: *laughs* but u r aibou. Your review by the way.
Me; *growls at Yami* Anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE CHAPTER CAUSE MY YAMI WIILL SEND U 2 THE SHADOW RHELM IF U DON'T UPDATE YET!!!

A story involving Mokuba and Seto but is not incest! Thank You for writing one!!!!! Even I have a limit to my own perversion and incest is not one of them! This is a promising fic and I hope you could continue on. I love this fic. I really love this fic! :)

YD: Now THIS is more like it!
DD: Yeah! Finally!!
YD: Where's the rest of it?
DD: Can't wait!!

aw, write some more please! Can u update by the end of the week? Even with the other story of the sequal of 'New Beginnings?' I wanna see what happens next!!! CONTINUE TO UPDATE!!!