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whau that was great, a bit sad in parts, but im glad that yami and yugi ended up together in the end, and bitchy anzu, sorry i dont like her, i really dont, stay away from yami , anzu, he loves yugi not you, dont ruin the happiness of many yaoi moments they could have, yami+yugi forever, those two are soulmates and deserve to be together. well done..... ^_^

that was a lovely fanfic, i liked the way you wrote the scenes. nice fanfic and keep on writing. go in peace..

THAT BITCH! she made yugi cry wtf is wrong with her hn i hope she suffers like yami ever would like a whore like her,i hope yami kicks her ass good job on the chapter good luck with the anzu bashing although it's not that hard *smirk*

this this once i must disagree with yugi,anzu cannot dance.alright i just had to clear that up,good story but there wasn't really any bashing in there,ah well maybe next time ^^

Hm, not bad for your first fic. And your right. Anzu's a bitch. I HATE her. She should die. Here's some advice: use a bit more descriptive writing. It was good but if you add a bit more "color" to your writing, then the piece will really come alive. Also, don't go so fast. Not to sound like a pervert, but work your way up to the passiOtheOtherwise, it was quite a good story. Don't put yourself down so much.

Nerf....^-^;hi....weeeeeeee.....that was yummy....ummm....mmmm...gooood....*-* please write more 2 this.....I-s likeing it...ooo!!!oooo!!! I know!!!! I know!!!! Have that stupid bitch 'Anzu' >_< do one of her stupid things....yep...that'd be just fine...nerf....he he...I loves that word....