AFF


menu
  • homeHome
  • insert_commentForums
  • account_boxLogin
    • account_boxLogin

      groupRegister
      cachedForgot Password
    • homeSite
      chrome_reader_modeNews
      groupMember Directory search
      library_booksT.O.S.
      listContent Guidelines
      photo_albumDMCA Info
      reportAbuse
      mail_outlineContact
      help_outlineF.A.Q.
      helpSupport
      peopleSupporters
      monetization_onDonate
      webFacebook
    • question_answerForums
      insert_commentForums Index
      chat_bubble_outlineNews in Forum
      chat_bubble_outlineContests
      chat_bubble_outlineSearching for stories?
      chat_bubble_outlineChallenges & Requests
      chat_bubble_outlineDribs, Drabs, and Doggy Tales
      chat_bubble_outlineAdopt a Story
      chat_bubble_outlineRequest a Category
      chat_bubble_outlineStory Codes
      chat_bubble_outlineHall of Shame
      chat_bubble_outlineF.A.Q.
      chat_bubble_outlineSupport
    • bookArchives
      bookmark_borderAnime
      bookmark_borderGundam, Beyblade, DBZ, FMA
      bookmark_borderBooks
      bookmark_borderBleach
      bookmark_borderBuffy/Angel
      bookmark_borderCartoons
      bookmark_borderComics
      bookmark_borderCelebrity Fiction
      bookmark_borderFinal Fantasy
      bookmark_borderGames
      bookmark_borderHarry Potter
      bookmark_borderInuyasha
      bookmark_borderLord of the Rings
      bookmark_borderManga
      bookmark_borderMovies
      bookmark_borderNaruto
      bookmark_borderNon-English
      bookmark_borderOriginals
      bookmark_borderTelevision
      bookmark_borderMarvel 'Verse
      bookmark_borderYu-Gi-OH
      bookmark_borderYuYu Hakusho
    • burst_modeAdvertising
      graphic_eqView Your Banner Stats
      graphic_eqAdvertising Information
      graphic_eqSupport
  • Naming the Flame

    By : Trei
    Category: Yu-Gi-Oh > General
    Views: 2769
    -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
    Disclaimer: I do not own YuGiOh!, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
  • Chapter List
    • 1-Dances With Wolves, Meet Spied on by Candle
    • 2-Bambi, Meet Ryou
    • 3-Bond, Meet Yami no Bakura
    • 4-Bishounen Elitists, Meet Riku
    • 5-Crookshanks, Meet Tabibito
    • 6-Lemon, Meet Candle
    • 1
    • 2
    • chevron_right
    • fast_forward
  • Naming the Flame

    Trei

    Disclaimer: Yu-Gi-Oh is not mine. I can prove
    this easily. One, if you gave me an un-subbed episode, I’d sit there blankly
    and smile, not because anything of worth was registering, but because the
    bishies on that show are extremely pretty. ;) Two, if I did own
    it, this story would probably be what I’d make the show to be. Ryou would be a lot
    more prominent, Malik would get more air time and the flashbacks to Egypt would
    be faithful to ancient Egyptian history (no miraculous Nile Hair Gel for
    the Pharaoh). Oh, and most importantly…I would be doing those things right now
    instead of crafting a story to represent what I only wishe> co> could be.
    ^_^ So there you have it. Not mine, never was mine, never will be mine. A real
    shame, too…I had plans for Malik and Ryou. ;)

    Chapter One

    Most men write cars,
    television sets and large boats at the top of their “most treasured” list. Ryou
    Bakura’s father, however, was in love with a bathtub. A Jacuzzi, to be more
    specific. But, as the middle-aged archaeologist would argue, it was a very manly
    Jacuzzi. And one similar to the one he had met Ryou’s mother in. But, of
    course, Ryou never pushed his father to elaborate on that specific detail.

    The Jacuzzi even had a
    name engraved on the side. Not its brand (which was Kohler), but a real
    custom-engraved name. Ryou feared for his father’s life whenever he
    brought back an ancient artifact from Egypt, always expecting a flair-haired
    psycho to come out like some twisted genie in a lamp. He’d had quite enough of
    that when he’d received his Sennen Ring (1), so graciously presented to him by
    his Jacuzzi-obsessive parent. But when he’d discovered the Jacuzzi Room while
    doing laundry, well, Ryou started worrying about his father’s rational
    stability as well.

    Not that any of this was
    actually breaking through to Ryou’s psyche at the moment. To be truthful, not
    even Italian opera sung by a dying rooster could have been strong enough to
    penetrate the haze. To an outsider, one would think the boy himself was dying
    he waoanioaning so loud. But in all fairness, that really wasn’t Ryou’s fault.

    If one were to place
    blame, one would look to the half-drenched blond tangled in his arms,
    masterfully casting lips and tongue to work that was driving Ryou to the
    precipice of his sanity. The only source of light was a feathery wisp of flame
    from a vanilla-scented candle near the doorway. If another outsider were to
    ask, the candle would have replied that never in its waxy life had it observed
    something so decadent. Its former owner, Isis Ishtar, never had such
    beautiful boys in her bathtub. In fact, the woman didn’t even have a
    boyfriend, don’t you know. And she never put a scrap of mousse to that flat
    hair, either….

    In a futile and
    halfhearted attempt to search out reality, Ryou snagged desperate hold of
    Malik’s neck, dragging the already heated kiss to feverish temperatures. This,
    however, only served to fuel the loss of reality rather than add to it. Not
    that either was too concerned, mind. No, they were content to lie in that
    frothing, tempestuous water while absentmindedly hurling logic and reality off
    the precipice of Ryou’s sanity.

    Malik was never one to go
    halfway with anything and lost the freedom of his hands to Ryou’s ethereally
    diamond-encrusted hair, moaning with content into the softened lips his were
    crushed against. He felt Ryou’s ankle digging into his back, but in the long
    run, he decided he could suffer a few bruises. Especially with bath times like
    this one. World domination could screw off with the opinionated candle for all
    he cared. This Jacuzzi was the only thing worth dominating right now.

    Ryou wondered absently in
    the tiny crumb-sized corner of his mind that still held conscious thought
    ti
    time it was. His father, by a horrible twist of fortune, was home for a bit of
    the summer holidays. (“Egypt is hot enough without me burning what’s left of my
    hair out under that sun…. I’d much rather spend the vacation with my son,”
    was how he’d jokingly put it.) As far as Ryou cared to remember, his father had
    left this morning around ten, promising to be home before dinner. Well, it was
    past dinner…. Or rather, it was past Ryou’s dinner with Malik. Or rather
    still…dinner of Malik.

    A deceptively graceful
    hand wove trembling fingers through Ryou’s, squeezing until their palms ached
    from the strain. Again, neither was bothered too greatly at present, seeing as
    how neither could feel anything but the other, see nothing but the other and
    want nothing but the other. The candle would have a field day of gossip when it
    got back to Isis’ bathroom. Cocky faucet had insisted that Isis’ younger
    brother was as heterosexual as Bruce Willis, but ohhh no. Here was flat
    evidence that that drooling faucet was lying through its tap.

    The couple were connected
    and flushed in every place imaginable. Yes - even there, you gutterdwellers.
    Ryou’s breath came out in a gasp as Malik pulled up for air, soaking in
    vanilla-saturated mist that merely helped along the red fire in both pairs of
    eyes. And while Ryou struggled to breathe correctly, Malik leaned in and feathered
    an affectionate kiss against the blazing plane of his koi’s forehead. Ryou
    interrupted a gasp in order to smile dotingly before dropping his head back
    onto the lip of the Jacuzzi, sucking air through passion-reddened lips.

    Malik chuckled and nuzzled
    the exposed ivory throat, catching the sensitive skin between the younger boy’s
    neck and shoulder impishly. As expected, Ryou’s body shuddered and the boy
    involuntarily squeezed his arms around Malik’s slick back with a sultry moan.
    “You - couldn’t - let me…” Ryou’s breath sharpened as the torturous mouth
    plagued his neck. “Catch my - breath?”

    Dipping his head to the
    side, Malik responded by biting down on the formerly visited vulnerable spot
    with fervor. Ryou cried out and forgot how exactly coherent speech was
    performed. His nails gripped for purchase at Malik’s shoulder blades, absently
    sliding his supple fingertips over the taboo marks engraved there. If he’d
    known of the short surge of panic that caused for Malik, he would have
    apologized, but as it was, Ryou could barely string a rudimentary thought
    together let alone a wholeken ken word.

    “No,” said the Egyptian
    teasingly, possessively reclaiming Ryou’s lips. The other boy was only too glad
    to respond, his lids dropping listlessly over dreamy molten chocolate gems.
    “And - I don’t think - you mind,” Malik added breathlessly, caressing Ryou’s
    forehead with tenderness he usually reserved only for his motorcycle (which he
    hadn’t been barking mad enough to name, thank you very much).

    Annoyed wbantbanter, Ryou
    impatiently put Malik back in his place, which was presently kissing the hell
    out of his koi. The Egyptian countered Ryou’s haste with excruciatingly slow
    motions that drove the very soul from Ryou’s poor worn throat. Malik distracted
    the younger boy by slipping his tongue through Ryou’s badly defended lips and
    ravished his koi’s lurid mouth, subtly taking a hand from the willowy locks.

    A moment later, the
    elegant wrists locked around Malik’s neck jerked the older teen into a roasting
    kiss that very nearly blistered the Egyptian’s sun-gingered lips. Ryou’s groans
    were no longer the sole source of noise coming from the torrid embrace. The
    candle’s flame flickered pryingly at their gasps and ravenous moans.
    Heterosexual indeed Sub Subsequent minutes
    followed a similar pattern until both drenched teenagers came down from their
    reckless high and nuzzled close in a warm, tender cuddle. Malik dunked his head
    back into the calming water, glad that Ryou had turned down the idea of using
    the Jacuzzi’s rather strong jets. His face freed of glistening, sopping wet
    blond, Malik surfaced and drew in a voracious breath. Then he pulled Ryou’s
    svelte figure to his chest and spent the next ten minutes bedeg thg the younger
    teen’s throat with lazy open-mouthed kisses. Ryou replied with contentment,
    holding their entangled hands against his lips while he leaned his head against
    Malik’s shoulder and submitted himself entirely to the Egyptian’s will.

    It touched Malik to sense
    how genuinely Ryou trusted him. No one else would abandon their defenses so
    easily in Malik’s arms. Ryou was the only one who had never in his life feared
    the Egyptian (2). Perhaps that was the reason they had lasted so long as the
    starry-eyed couple so many of Ryou’s family and friends would scorn if they knew.

    But that was the beauty of
    treachery. No one did know.

    Ryou softened the tense
    muscles in Malik’s hand with deliberate strokes of his thumb, absently
    snuggling his face deeper into the crook of the Egyptian’s shoulder. Trust was
    in the younger boy’s very breathing, gentle showers of cool air that had helped
    bring Malik back from the deranged madman his tormented childhood had twisted
    him into. His Ryou. His tenshi (3). His koi.

    It was after one
    particularly prolonged throat-kiss that Ryou said, “I think I’d better call my
    father.”

    Well, if there was any
    other way to make Malik Ishtar yelp, it probably wasn’t as effective as Ryou’s.
    “You mean leave me all alone?” he asked, marinating his voice in a reasonably
    deep puddle of hurt.

    Ryou turned his head and caught
    Malik’s lips in a softened, promising kiss. Then, in a voice richer and
    smoother than melted butter, he whispered, “You’d rather I stay here until I
    freeze to death?”

    A moment’s hesitation,
    then, “You wouldn’t have to freeze.” And he emphasized this implication with a
    kiss that stole not only Ryou’s breath but his memory as well.

    What was it he was going
    to do?

    “Oh, Malik….”

    Oh, well. It probably
    wasn’t important anyway.

    Moments of impassioned desire
    passed like melted water streaking impetuously down the slope of an icicle. It
    wasn’t until they were so close it hurt that the kiss became cause for worry.
    Ryou knotted his hands in Malik’s hair and moaned loudly into Egyptian lips
    with reckless abandon. His body, so heated by Malik’s, began to tremble under
    the slightest touch, which included Malik’s nimble fingers ing ing his hips
    steady.

    One of them cried out,
    though who was unclear through the blankets of passionate vapor.

    Malik’s lips were fixed on
    Ryou’s as he drove the slender body to a low platform, trapping the smaller boy
    easily. Positioning a knee on either side of Ryou’s hips, Malik hovered over
    his koi and with a heartfelt smile, descended on Ryou’s mouth again.

    “Love you,” he gasped sharply.

    Ryou smoothed a hand
    through the sunkissed locks amorously in reply, telling Malik in actions what
    he currently could not with words. Sometimes words were better expressed when
    nothing was said at all.

    Seconds later, Malik was
    entirely and willingly enmeshed in Ryou’s arms, bewitching his sweeter koi’s
    lips with sinful lust. Daunted by the emotion flowing between them, Ryou
    reached up an urgent hand and clutched Malik’s slick arm weakly. Every string
    of energy in him was being utilized by his lips, still thrashing against
    Malik’s in a battle he was all too enthusiastic to lose. Still, the rate of
    their actions was making him nervous and he knew he wouldn’t be able to stop if
    it went on for much longer.

    Malik felt the urgency of
    Ryou’s kiss, but at the same time sensed his koi’s reluctance to take that next
    step. So, lowering the passion of their exploits, the Egyptian slowly pulled
    away from Ryou, still holding the smaller boy like a jeweled treasure. “Only -
    when you’re - ready,” he gasped softly, kissing Ryou’s feverish forehead
    gently. Then, winking cheekily, he said, “But - when that time comes…you’ll
    have to - convince me it’s worth it.”

    Blushing vividly and
    panting as if wounded, Ryou smiled shyly and leaned the side of his face on
    Malik’s collarbone, breathing in the Egyptian’s exotic scent. “Thank you,” he
    whispered gratefully.

    Malik softenes pas palm
    over Ryou’s face tenderly. “Anything for you, tenshi.”

    Then Malik loosened his
    hold on Ryou and let the younger boy nestle comfortably against him. After the
    formerly turbulent water surrounding them had pacified and contented itself
    with gently lapping against the ful ful pair, Malik took to running a hand
    through Ryou’s feathery hair, nuzzling his face close to the natural perfume of
    jasmine and cherries.

    Then there was a creak on
    the stairs above the Jacuzzi Room.

    Oh. That’s what
    Ryou had wanted to do before.

    Malik noticed the sudden
    loss of color in Ryou’s face and struck an expression of inquiry. He hadn’t
    heard anything. But he heard the next noise easily.

    The door opened with an
    audible “snap” and Mr. Gave-My-Son-a-Gold-Thing-With-Mental-Psyche-Issues
    appeared in the door, looking slightly bemused. Then his eyes fell on the
    Jacuzzi. His Jacuzzi. And then his son. And the startled Egyptian on top
    of his son.

    Ryou immediately withdrew
    his arms from around Malik’s neck and tried to speak. “Father….” But what else
    could he say? “Hey, Pops, this is Malik. A few months ago he was trying to take
    over the world, but he’s relatively safe now. Er, just don’t give him sharp
    objects and anything with caffeine and he won’t attack you right away.”

    Unfortunately, Malik was
    also fond of imagining humorous situations. And the problem with that
    was he also liked to act them out as well. “So, this is your father, Ryou?” he
    asked with a smirk. “I’ve been wondering…. Does he use this oversized bathtub
    to its potential?”

    Ryou’s father turned
    white, then green, then red and then a rather amusing shade of purple. “You…”
    he choked out. “Who are you!? What are you doing here!?”

    Malik smiled sardonically
    and before Ryou could reach out to cover his koi’s overactive mouth, said
    lazily, “Why don’t you ask your son?”
    u eyu eyed the water,
    measuring it carefully. He wondered how long it would take for him to drown
    under there. But no. His father wouldn’t let him get out of a more mortifying
    death so easily.

    “Ryou,” Malik whispered
    into his koi’s ear amusedly, “your father looks ready to spear something.”

    Or someone, Ryou thought with a twinge of
    alarm as his father suddenly grabbed an idle plunger from beside the toilet and
    swung it headlong at Malik’s head. Ryou could have sworn he saw the candle
    laughing at them as Malik ducked the blow. A shame his father hadn’t decided to
    throw that at them…

    Well, it wasn’t the
    traditional “Hey, Dad, I’m gay,” Christmas dinner fiasco he had imagined, but
    hey, it was something at least.

    To be Continued…

    1. Sennen Ring: another
    name for the Millennium Ring. Most frequently used in Egypt.

    2. I’m of the opinion
    Ryou’s braver than most give him credit for. And Isis and Rishid have probably
    at one time or another been a little nervous at their brother’s lunatic
    performances. Hell, even Yami has to get scared sometimes. Fortunately, Ryou’s
    got the license to be perfect in this chapter.

    3. Tenshi (angel)
    • 1
    • 2
    • chevron_right
    • fast_forward
  • You need to be logged in to leave a review for this story.You need to be logged in to leave a review for this story.
    Report Story
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate
Adult-FanFiction.Org is not in any way associated with or related to FanFiction.Net

Adult-FanFiction.org (AFF, the site), its owners, agents, and any other entities related to Adult-FanFiction.org or the AFF forum take no responsibility for the works posted to the Adult-FanFiction.org by its members.

While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.

All works displayed here, whether pictorial or literary, are the property of their owners and not Adult-FanFiction.org. Opinions stated in profiles of users may not reflect the opinions or views of Adult-FanFiction.org or any of its owners, agents, or related entities.

Website Domain ©2002-2017 by Apollo. PHP scripting, CSS style sheets, Database layout & Original artwork ©2005-2017 C. Kennington. Restructured Database & Forum skins ©2007-2017 J. Salva. Images, coding, and any other potentially liftable content may not be used without express written permission from their respective creator(s). Thank you for visiting!

Powered by Fiction Portal 2.0
Modifications © Manta2g, DemonGoddess
Site Owner - Apollo