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By : Fel5
  • From Naye025 on February 10, 2005
    One again another chapter that continues to amaze me! You are truly a WONDERFUL writer!! An inspiration to me! Even through 50+ chapters, your story hasn't missed a beat or managed to let me down. Not even once. I will continue to read this fic and I can't wait for the next update!

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on February 08, 2005
    Goodness, Goodness. Sounds like there is going to be lots of trips to Germany in the near future...
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  • From Pussycat on February 07, 2005
    “Sumimasen gozaimasu for keeping you waiting, but I had to retrieve all the requested files before being allowed to attend your meeting. My name is Jounouchi Katsuya, at your service.”
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO What is the puppy up to??

    "But if I have to work for it, fight for it, that’s when I feel like myself, when I can proof that I’m worth of every single thing I can call mine. Including you.”
    *snickers* He's gotten much better at fighting with logic. Love it.

    “Seeing how many times I can make you scream my name before you loose conciousness.”
    *laughs* It's good to set goals.

    “Hai. First comes the shouting contest, then the kissing contest and finally the screaming contest. Although mostly they move from shouting directly to screaming.”
    *laughs hysterically* He makes it sound like a bad thing!!

    Some twenty minutes later, the younger couple had to call in defeat…
    *howls* i'd be surprised if they didn't call it quits first.

    It got so bad, that Seto actually called in an ‘Contra-Burnout Vacation’
    *jaw drops* Wait... wait wait wait. _Seto_ forcing _Jou_ to take time off?? *faints*

    “They-they’re moving you up to the higher classes? You passed all exams for the current two semesters and are being cut short one year of studying?”
    Wooohooo! way to go puppy!

    “Define ‘foreign.’”

    The blond gulped, then hushed:

    “Germany.”
    Ooooooooo you are mean! *laughs* keep patting yourself on the back, just don't let it delay any more updates. *smirks*

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2005
    Woohoo, awesome, cool, great, ummmm WICKED!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 24, 2005
    Congrats on the 100+ mark!

    Katsuya smiled again, before bending down and, grabbing Honda’s collar, snarled:

    “Would you then mind to behave accordingly?”

    *laughs*

    Not only because Seto had allowed him to invite his entire class aswell as Yugi-tachi, but because he was dancing with Kaminari Reiko, his secret crush.
    AWWWWWWWWWW that's sooo cute!

    “’Because deep down in my heart I knew we were meant to be’- that’s sooo romantic!”

    He sniffled and batted his eyelashes in a very girlish manner at Seto.
    *howls*

    OOOOOOOO lemon! lemon lemon lemon!! whoooooooo

    Giving a tired smirk, the blonde muttered:

    “What’s with you guys and getting laid on your birthdays?” before he joined his husband in dream land.
    *falls over laughing*

    I loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - akuchan on January 24, 2005
    Poor Seto he;s lucky he didn't have a coronary walking in on Mokuba that way. That was way too funny, and Jou's reaction was perfect.
    Great story.
    Akuchan
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  • From ANON - Chikky on January 24, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG!!!!

    "AND DO USE THEM!"-> This was the best line in this chappie. I loved it and you need to write more... and detailed for your fans who love you greatly. Bai bai now~!
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  • From ANON - Chikky on January 24, 2005
    Okay so it only took you a month to update but you are forgiven because you gave your loyal fans 2 stories to hold them over till you got through it and where was smut, may i ask? Ah well... those meanies need to die~! Another well done chappie and hopefully you will be updating soon.
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on January 23, 2005
    I'm glad you updated this... another excellent chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 23, 2005
    YAAAAAAAAAAAY About time!

    “And aren’t we glad, that both of this facts apply!” mumbled the younger one, before he made a mad dash for the door, narrowly escaping his brother’s hug.
    *laughs hysterically* Go Mokuba! Loved his explanation of the deal.

    *gasps* Jou's room! That's awful! *laughs* Well... Jou is a Kaiba now, it would stand to reason he'd pick something up from his husband.

    Within a week, the culprits had been flushed out and forced to leave Toyohashi Daigakkou for good.
    *applauds* Way to go Jou!!

    “You did hear well, Kitamura-san. As of his upcoming sixteenth birthday, Mokuba will officaly take over the seat of vice-president of Kaiba Corp."
    WOOOHOOO Mokuba! I think a lot of people forget just how smart that kid is...

    “Yet, there is someone we both would rather see dead, ne?”
    Uhhhohhhhh

    Cradling the decrepit motherboard in his left arm, legs drawn to his body and screwdriver resting loosely in his right hand, Seto lay on the floor admidst cables, wires, RAMs and processors, fast asleep, a content smirk tilting his lips ever so lightly.
    AWWWWWWWWW that's just so damned CUTE!! *laughs*

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Chikky on January 06, 2005
    Hey, I was just wondering when you were going to update.... please email me with an approximate time... thank you so much. By the way I love this story and thats why I want you to update.
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  • From Naye025 on January 06, 2005
    Sweet! Loved that chapter! It was well worth the wait! Now, what could have Mokuba done?!

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 21, 2004
    “I’m seme!”
    *howls* I can see them doing this!

    “Fuck me, Katsuya, FUCK ME!!!”
    For a second, Katsuya lost his rhythm.
    and Kat loses her train of thought....

    “You know, once you’re awake, I will have to tell you how beautiful you are, when you’re unconcious.”
    *falls over laughing* That's so.... Jou.

    *laughs* "that's what your eyes always do" Oooo some puppy is happy with himself! *cackles*

    "The blond’s face went from a slight pink to an angry red then a deep, purplish blue, as his breathing grew more and more ragged, before he finally slumped to his knees, Seto catching him, before he hit the floor."
    *shrieks in laughter* I love this part best! Seto's idea of revenge is just amazing!

    "Seto only gaped at the blond he had left trembling and semi-concious on the beach, who was now approaching the fridge and picked out a can of soda, which he then pressed on the marks the tentacles had caused on his left arm."
    *wipes tears from eyes* I love this so much. It's just so damned funny!

    .... vanilla sirop? Oh. My. God. *fans self and wipes chin* Ummm.... oh my god. that's just... I so do NOT want to know where you got that idea! I don't wanna know!

    Oooooooo Mokuba is soooo dead when big brother finds out.

    Nice to see you back! *shakes head* That vanilla sirop is gonna have me wondering forever...

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on December 20, 2004
    Oh do tell! I want to know! LOL. Update soon, that was so damn good! ^_^
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  • From ANON - yaoishoujo on December 11, 2004
    BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! I cried for Seto's death in the first chapter and cried during the most beautiful wedding ceremony in the last chapter! America needs to stop being so damned closed minded/hearted and let gays get married! They're people too, you know!? Those vows really got to me!*sniffles* So touching! I want to say, arigatou, for having those two get married. It warms my heart when I know someone else supports gay marraige! I could feel the love those two were sharing! Omedeto on your first yaoi novel! I'd say it was a winner! You are a true writer and a damn good one at that! Thank you for a wonderful, heart-tugging story about finding love!

    The sex was great, too!~lol~=^_^= HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! It could have been more detailed, but I shouldn't complain. The story itself makes up for that! Okay, I've talked long enough! I might accidentelly turn my review into a novel!~_~ So, in conclusion, awesome story with a perfect ending? Is it the end..........? Are you planning on writing more than 52 chapters or am I just talking out of my ass right now?!-_-;;; In any event, you're a brilliant writer! Keep up the good work! Ja ne!
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