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Reviews for Burning Sea

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 05, 2005
    Yuji: I repeat! Yami and Marik are BAD INFLUENCES! Yup.
    Yumi: *Laughing* Holy shit that was just too funny!
    Yuji: Huh? What was?
    Yumi: The whole Ryou, Bakura trying to screw while Marik and Yami were yelling at them. That was just to funny!
    Yuji: I giggled! I agree that was funny.
    Yumi: I still want some Malik/Marik action or if possible Yugi/Yami
    Yuji: Yes please!
    Yumi: So update soon please!
    Yuji: Yes please! Please!
    Yumi: C ya!
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  • From ANON - ferocity on March 04, 2005
    awww!what a cute ending. But goddamn was that sex scene hotter than fire!! gosh keep going.
    love always
    fero.
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  • From ANON - DH on March 02, 2005
    Wow, a new chapter, bout time they got something going!
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  • From ANON - Lilie the mouse on March 02, 2005
    Very nice lemon. Makes a day at work all the better :)
    *puppy dog eyes* could we have some Marik/Malik and Yami/Yugi action too, phuleez? Even Malik had his glorious chapter... Yugi didn't have anything at all... :'(
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  • From Wicabeth on March 02, 2005
    Holy shit O.O;;... I think I need to change into a dry pair of panties after that lemon.... *pants..*
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 01, 2005
    Yuji: Oh forgot to say something! Don't change the couples! They're my favorites the only that aren't is Duke/Seto and Joey/Tris but I can deal with that! Just don't change the Yugi/Yami Ryou/Bakura and Malik/Marik THOSE are really my absolute favorites!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 01, 2005
    Yuji: Oh god! I loved this! The romance is really touching me! ^.^
    Yumi: Romance?! The first lemon and it was hot!
    Yuji: I liked it! Bakura finally confessed! But I was pretty mad at him when he said all those mean things to Ryou.
    Yumi: Oh but he made it up for it! Oh and those perverts! *Laughs* God I thought I wouldn't be able to stop laughing when Yami: Yugi, Malik, and Marik were watching those two have sex like it was some sort of free show! ^.^
    Yuji: Ohh! Marik and Yami are bad influences on Malik and Yugi!
    Yumi: I don't mind. Sometimes it's good to be a bad influence.
    Yuji: Oh well *shurgs* At I really like this! And the garden pool thingy sounds so cool! It must be very romantic!
    Yumi: And the perfect place for another lemon. Maybe Marik/Malik next? Or Mikado/Ahmose (I like them, they're cool)
    Yuji: Perv.
    Yumi: Only when it's getting good.
    Yuji: Well please update soon! Please! I'm really liking this!
    Yumi: Ditto!
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  • From ANON - Malik the Psycho on March 01, 2005
    I dont like Ryou in this XD But anyways, good fic, good lemon..*Whispers* I want MarikxMalik action next*Grin*
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on March 01, 2005
    Ryou kicked Kura's butt!! YES! Go Ryou! Can't wait for the next update and to see what happens!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2005
    I love this fic! I can't WAIT to read the next chapter! I kind of remember this chapter. And I THINK you had chapter 17 up before...but I don't remember. Oh well! ^-^
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  • From ANON - ethereal on February 22, 2005
    I've really enjoyed this fic so far. You have wonderful charioteers that are both realistic and likable. Your descriptions really paint a picture of the story and your plot is very original. I can't wait to see how this develops, particularly with Ryou and Bakura. I love the way you've done those two. How you've made Bakura distant and cold (but not too cold ^_^) and Ryou gentle but not helpless. I also like that you haven’t rushed their relationship too much. It will make for a more interesting story line. Good job and please keep up the good work.

    Ethereal

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  • From ANON - anubiset on February 22, 2005
    ryou did good. that was a great way to get on Seto`s good side. I loved it. Keep up the great work.

    (sorry about typos or anything I`m sick)
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on February 21, 2005
    YAY!!!! Ryou kicked ass!!! literally! Saved Seto and had Yami's back! Go Ryou!!!! Though I still think (even more so now) that Bakura needs his butt kicked or Ryou to just find someone better for him!!! Great chapter though and I can't wait for the next one!!
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  • From ANON - Lilie the mouse on February 21, 2005
    *faithfully reading* :)
    .... you don't like poor Yugi, eh? :)
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  • From ANON - Heaven&Hell on February 21, 2005
    Hell: fuckin' BRILLIANT! PURE GENIUS! damn.
    Heaven: oh yes very well done! I absolutley loved it! *round 'o plause*^^
    Hell: battle scene was awsome. Probably my fav part. All that blood
    and fighting and chaos *shivers* Delicious
    Heaven: eh, r-right, anywhoo, we loved the way Ryou got some of the
    action too. Instead of just sittin' there like a helpless idiot, you got him
    kickin some--
    Hell: kickin' some real good ass, baby!
    Heaven: it was nice to see a little change.
    Hell: hell fuckin' yeah!
    Heaven: *sigh* i wish you wouldn't use such profanity. Anywho it would be GREATLY wanted
    and apreciated if you update very soon.
    Hell: i agree. Maybe soon Ryou will get some different action. Some very GOOD action
    from Bakura. We'll be waiting.
    Heaven: *smile* till' next time! Ja ne!
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