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Reviews for Burning Sea

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Jessica on September 20, 2005
    This is definitely gettin' good! Can't wait to see what happens to our lovely three! If Ryou wants to be a believable Bakura, he definitely needs to put on a better poker face! Loved it, though! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Cutter on September 20, 2005
    Ryou!!!!!!!!!!! No! Don't stop there!
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  • From Saka on September 18, 2005
    Oh no poor Ryou. What's gonna happen? Please update soon I just hafta know if everyone makes it on time or if they're gonna be too late. Please please please please please please please please please please.....update soon again! Keep up the awesome work!!

    ~IceAngel~
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on September 18, 2005
    RD*hisses with all the rage she feels ove what is happening to Ryou then charger through the room encases Ryou and an endlessly shifting wall of scales as hard as diamond while she grabs the guards Keith Tea and the judge chains them all to the wall takes ryou to be cuddled and comforted by Yami and Marik then slams the door shut tight then changes the walls to be a cold as space and uncomfortable as sleeping on spiked and bumby rocks then for tea keith and the Judge puts a solid steel casing aroud them covered with several thousan tons of solid rock then has the magma of the earth surface and burn boil and melt them alive then she grabs some magma mixes it with water and creates barrels of acid connects them to tubes and puts one end of the tubes into the mouths of the guards and has them burned alive form the inside out then restores them all removes the casings and the barrells then takes a leaf out of the Prince of Egypt leaves the room and hears screams as swarms of locuts scarabs plagues and other foul insects fill the room fit to bursting then she removes the insects and plagues then with a snap of her finger teleports Yami Marik and Ryou away from the building then in an almighty clash of power mixxing with Slifer Ra and Obelisk the Three Legendary Dragons as well as Exodia and with a huge kamakazi like surge of power obliterates the entire building leaving nothing in its wake* huh well thats all for now boy those pigs are going to get when Bakura finds out what became of Ryou huh brave soul doing all that for those who he once hated they should be proud of him well keep up the great work and update soon hehe im so sry ryou STAY STRONG my lil white haired usagi you can do it just hold strong if Yugi can do it so can you i believe in you ryou
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  • From ANON - azhur on September 18, 2005
    WAAIIII!!! you is mean!!! ... update soon i'm dying of knowing what will happen next!!
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  • From Wicabeth on September 18, 2005
    WHAAAAA!!!!!!! RYOU!! ;.;!! *stabs all the horrible people that are torturing him*

    Bakura's going to rip them all a new one when he finds out.
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  • From ANON - Liz on September 18, 2005
    oh no poor Ryou. He's going to get beaten, ne? come on Bakura hurry up, your lover is in trouble and needs you. all i can say is that at least the spanish don't know that who they think is Bakura really isn't. please update soon. this is defenitly my favourite fan fic. Keep up the story writing, your talented. and i would love to more new fan fics of yours.
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  • From ANON - MinuetLove on September 17, 2005
    Poor Ryou...torture is never a good thing. This was a great chapter though, hope help arrives in time to save them all!
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  • From ANON - December Jewel on September 17, 2005
    Oh! NO! RYOU! Oi! I don't want to be near when Bakura ever comes there... Continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Drago on September 16, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 13, 2005
    Oh my! I cant just see all the endless hugging when they all meet again.. this is.. assuming they will.. 0.0 yeah.. yes they will! WONT THEY? *panics*
    Lmao at how scared everyone was of Bakura! XD That was great.
    Oh well, off they go to save teh others! ^^
    UPDATE! ..right now. Go, shoo!
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  • From ANON - Tessa on September 13, 2005
    *cries* OMR! I hope Bakura is right about the five day thing. Hes such a grand pirate too ^^
    I loved how Seto waiting until the others left and left Kura have a big cry ;_; POOR LITTLE RYOU.. and teh others too. I could just imagine everything thinking that was Ryou on the Black Magicain and the "You son of a bitch" with everyone liek "OMGWTF!?!?!?" *chuckles* Nicely done.
    Cant waaait for an update!! ITS SO EXCITING!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Jessica on September 12, 2005
    Ooooooo, you devil tease!...^-^...you did a great job starting from where you left off! I totally thought it was Seto that was the traitor...(course with that last scene, my suspicions still remain to be qualmed)...though, it's nice that he's there to comfort him...I'm surprised Yami, Marik, and even Ryou didn't get a chance to scuffle before they were knocked out and captured!...but everything is getting ~sooooo~ good! Awesome job! I can't wait until the next chapter!...*squeals* I'm just so glad to see an update! I love this story! Ja! ^_^
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  • From ANON - jennifer on September 12, 2005
    Wow i love the new chapter. it was awsome. i can't wait to see hwta happens next ur a very sensational writer. Burning sea is one of my favourite stories, and i only have 2 favourites. please keep up the good work. and i cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - shadow raven on September 12, 2005
    Yay! Another great chapter! And a quick update too! Please continue soon!
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