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Reviews for Burning Sea

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Liz on September 03, 2005
    wow an update already *jumps up and down* and i hope its not long for another. Anyway i didn't think there were 2 betrayers but i knew Tea was a betrayer. So was the demotion of Bakura and Marik fake? i hope it was. i can't believe both Yami and Marik are mistaking Ryou for Bakura but over all it was great chappie. Please update soon

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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on September 02, 2005
    RD: grr GOD DAM THAT FUCKING SLUT ASS BITCH AND THAT TWO TIMING BACK STABBING MURDEROUS BASTARD (sry but im pissed and beyond angry) HOW DARE U BETRAY YAMI MARIK AND BAKURA THIS WAY OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH I CANT WAIT TILL BAKURA GETS HIS HANDS ON THOSE TWO THEY ARE SOOO DEAD FUCKING WROTTING COPRSE SOON TO B GOING DOWN TO DAVY JONES LOCKER huh ok now im done shouting time to torture *grabs her scimitars and starts slicing tea and keith to ribbons again and again and again over and over for at least what seems like 50,000 yrs but i just altered time for that brief bit to make it so it seemed like i tortured them with my swords for that long when really it was only 50 seconds then restores them and hurdles the most lethal of poisons and toxins and acids at tea and keith till there nothing but pools of blood and flesh then she restores them again and for the last time and sends them bothe so much fear they crack and then extracts there souls to torment for eternity* ok im done but oooooooooooh thank GOD ryou nocked Bakura on concious THANK YOU RYOU *glomps her second fav hikari next to yugi* THANK U THANK U THANK U if wasnt for u there would be no way for the DM to get there captain and second mate along with Bakura's lover back safetly but instead he can save them YAY and since its Kura who gets to dish out the punishment u can bet it will be excrutiating grr bitch i hope she gets infected with the worst disease known to men for being such an ugly slut and u keith WROT I GOD DAM HELL U SOB man do i wish HE suffered at the hands of Katrina let him be taken down by illness and heat stroke that would teach him U GOD DAM MOTHER FUCKING PIECE OF CAMMEL SHIT huh ok im calm im relaxed hehe sry bout that but as u can tell im PISSED >___< huh but still great chappie now that i know y Yami did all that even though he did kinda go a wee bit far on someone who just saved one his bf from being captured now he owes Ryou BIG time for this one huh gtg now JA NE and update soon nd keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - MinuetLove on September 02, 2005
    Wow, great plot twist! Nice to see that Yami hasn't lost his marbles completely, although he may wish he had now that he's heading towards execution. Can't wait to see how Yugi, Bakura, and Malik save their loves! Write more soon please!
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  • From ANON - sneh on September 01, 2005
    I hope Yugis okay!!
    I cannot believe Yami would do that. Its not like Yami HAD to watch Bakura and Ryou (and Marik) fuck. And now.. now they're going to have to stay with the crew.. EW! OMG! THEY"RE GOING TO DIE ARENT THEY! Ive worked it out. They will have to stay with the crew, and the evil dudes will KILL THEM IN THEIR SLEEP! Then Yami will blame himself (so he sould) and kill himself, leaving Yugi the ship and he'll be the new captian.. OMG NO! IM GIVING YOU IDEAS! DONT YOU DARE WRITE THAT *cries* Yami hurt Ryou.. omg i bet he hurt Kuras arm when he pushed him. What about Malik? Does he blame him too. How could he! THEY WERENT EVEN THERE!
    *spazz* Oh oh.. Yugi will make Yami take them back.. yeah.. thats what will happen. Yugi will convince him. He was just upset cos Yugi was hurt.. thats it. But in the meantime. AH! They're going to die *sobs*
    PLEASE UPDATE and put me out of my misery. but dont kill them. Make Yami take them all back.. with open arms. So they can hug.
    *still crying*
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  • From ANON - Tessa on September 01, 2005
    OMGWTF!?! How awful. How he blame Kura and Marik AND RYOU for what happen.. omgwtf! *is shocked*

    Okay soo.. im assuming this is some kind of angry sudden thing that will change back right..? *is so cut* Poor Ryou. Yami hurt-ed heeem
    Good chapter anyways. Write more soon.. so you can leik have the un-demoted.. or.. something *shrugs*




    *still not over it* stupid Yami.
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  • From ANON - Ethereal on August 30, 2005
    Wow, Yami sure is pissed. I hope Yugi will be okay and his attacker will be found. Poor Bakura and Marik (not to mention Ryou and Malik as well). Can't wait for more, please update soon.

    Ethereal

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  • From ANON - shadow raven on August 30, 2005
    This is really good so far! I hope you update again soon! I wanna see what happens to poor Yugi! Poor Marik and Bakura...so confused.
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on August 30, 2005
    Oh, wow. That's all I can really say. Yami went crazy because Yugi got hurt. He even kicked Ryou out! Oh god I wonder what happens now. C ya!
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  • From ANON - Liz on August 29, 2005
    yay u updated at long last!!!!!! But i never expected that to happen. Update very soon please. Is Yugi going to be ok? Who's this person that is trying to kill them. after what happened who wouldn't be angry but boy does Yami get angry
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  • From ANON - MinuetLove on August 29, 2005
    Poor Yugi....I only hope he survives this attack like the others did. I imagine that Yami won't be promoting Marik and Bakura until Yugi's well again, wonder where they will sleep? Love the story, write more soon please!
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  • From Kugatsu on August 29, 2005
    holy shizmatic...damn.

    Who is trying to kill all these folks! I'll bet it's keith...or espa..*shiftyeyes*

    Seto?
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  • From Wicabeth on August 29, 2005
    Oh no! I hope Yugi is going to be okay!!! That lemon scene was nice. Poor Ryou getting tossed out like that. *cuddles poor hurt Yugi*
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  • From ANON - Hikari Raine on August 29, 2005
    wow yami's mean. glad that you updated the chapter was kinda short and hopefully the next chappy will be longer right? :p since it was so long since the last update it kinda threw me off a bit when you started with a practice scene. well hope the next update won't be such a long wait
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  • From Saka on August 28, 2005
    You updated!! *glomps tightly* YAY!! This story is really cool and I love it a lot.

    Great chapter. I really loved it so much! Just like all of your other works- it was a masterpiece! I just love this fic so much

    Neat threesome- I bet Yami was surprised when he came into the room.

    Poor Yugi though- is he really gonna die?! Oh man...now I wanna read the next chapter.

    I can’t believe that Marik ‘n Bakura were demoted. Now whoever’s tryin to kill them is gonna be dealin with two angry psychos....yikes. I don’t wanna be on that ship.

    Anyways I hope ya update soon again! I shall be waitin....

    ~IceAngel~

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  • From ANON - OsaP on August 28, 2005
    mmm angst. delicious. i do so luv this fic and it's porny interludes. you've made me a bakura/ryou lemon fan from this fic. ^_^ i hope u update soon cuz i really enjoy this. XD
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