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Reviews for Innocent Guilt

By : ShadowSanctuary
  • From ANON - Jessica on November 06, 2005
    Okay...AFF officially hates me and reviews...

    ...loved your story and your writing style!....admired the way you could pull off humor within such a dark storyline!...laughed my ass off at Seto's display after falling off the stairs (how he could pull off a snarl while bleeding through a hole in his head)...Great job and good luck in hopes you continue with this fic! ^____^
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 06, 2005
    ...hmmmm...very first review got cut off...>,
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 06, 2005
    Hi!...me again...just wanted to also throw in that this story has such a great sense of direction that it shouldn't be wasting away in limbo! It has potential to be even more powerful than it already is!...but not to say that you should rush it, either!...just a note saying 'yay' or 'nay' on whether you will continue!...and also to let you know that either way, this fic has struck an emotional chord in my heart, so even if it's unfinished, this small glimpse moved me! Thank you and good luck! ^^'
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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 06, 2005
    Hey, you!...*places hands on hips*...Where are you with our update, hmmmm?!...>___
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  • From ANON - summerraen on July 28, 2005
    Oh goodness! Why would you stop?! This is suuuch a good story! You've captured the main character's thoughts very well (not to mention that they are pretty much the exact thoughts of an actual person with an ED), and your writing and eloquency are SUPERB. Way to go! Now, write me some more- and fast!


    PS: Please :)
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  • From ANON - Chys on May 20, 2004
    Uriel, Gabriel and Muggles huh? Something's just way off with this fic ya know? Did you actually write this cause I could have sworn I've read parts of this in other places. Either way, it needs fixed, or else it won't make any sense in this way. You were calling Mokuba Uriel and Jounouchi Gabriel... and I doubt Mokuba's a wizard, ne?


    Chys
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  • From bloodquartz on May 10, 2004
    this, i dont think i can find the words really. Its beautifully painfull and brutally honest. It has the same seductive sway as what it describes and the same painful truth underlying it with feelings that i know all to well.
    Truthfully i don't know whether to say thank you or damn you (nothing personal of course, its just my reaction to the content) you've actually managed to convey a part of the pain and hatred that underscores ED and depression and so many other things that our society doesn't want to acknowledge - yet everyone who recognises it falters in the face of. One thing i've found - people who know what its like seem to drown in the pain that is conveyed whereas those who don't - simply don't understand. Lucky them.
    Thank you. Thank you for actually pulling the truth out of a subject that is much misconstrued.
    sorry - tis one am and i'm angsty and fretting. But i just had to say something.
    I'd really like to see more of how this story plays out. Your writing is beautiful.
    thanks.
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