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By : MarikIshtar77
  • From ANON - Nightmare on November 12, 2004
    cool another update! personaly I wouldn't be trying very hard to escape from Yamis prediciment, unless somthing wierd was about to happen (we know it is)

    Hows Ucky Doey going to reacte when he finds out about Serenity??? please destory Noa (I really, really, really hate him)

    See ya Nightmare
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  • From ANON - Arias5 on November 12, 2004
    woohoo for Yami...hehe...nasty thoughts popping up, and i forgive ur muses...now we know what happened to Yami. ^__^hehe...you must write more!
    ~*peace*~
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  • From ANON - deadghost on November 10, 2004
    hello again. I haven't finished reading this yet... I'm relly tired right now and I have classes early tomorrow. I just thougd lid live a little review before I went to bed.
    I really liked the Ryou/Malik lemon in chapter 9. It was so sweet. I love the relationship they have.
    Mokuba's prank phone call was just too funny... laughed a lot. Actually I spat some of the coffee I was drinking on my keyboard (just dandy! poor keyboard of mine: juice, cigarrette burns and ashes, tomato s and and now coffee!)

    (I quote)"The colors that were shooting out of me! Lordy it was hideous! Blues, and greens, and reds.......chunks of turquoise! I thought I was dyin’! I saved that shit as evidence!” ----> damn, that really was hilarious.

    What's the deal with those eating habits? pizza, nachos, bacon for breakfast (is it healthy to eat so much fat in the morning?)... (did you know that Texas is the most obese city? state? in the world? every time me and my friends see a fat person, we say "that guy must be from Texas" or "that guy is Texas-sized" (like when they super-size your combo at McDonalds) etc). Seriously, it is kind of disturbing the amount of gross junk food they put in their stomachs. By now I guess they should really be texas-sized: not even a god-like metabolism could work against that huge amount of saturated fats. (I'm sorry if I offended someone with this, but just as smoking, being fat is a desease. Not healthy, no, no, no. People say that smoking is a bad habit, which it is, but when you call a people "fat", they say you're discriminating them when in reality you're just trying to make them conscious they should get help... I'm trying to quit smoking so I hope I don't sound like an hypocrite).

    Maybe the last part was a bit out of context, sorry I couldn't help myself. I'll give you more of my opinions when I continue reading.

    Cheers!

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  • From ANON - deadghost on November 10, 2004
    hey. I was reading "Hellraisers" and I liked it a lot so I decided to check out your stuff. I just finished reading "Love lies" and I liked it a lot too, so I'm going to start reading the sequel.
    Now, the point: while reading Love lies I found a little mistake. In that scene where Seto invited Joey for dinner and there was this Carlotaid aid and she spoke in Spanish... she said "for real"... well, the translation for that isn't "para verdadero". The correct way of saying it is: "¿en serio?" or "¿de verdad?". And "Thak you" is "Muchas gracias" and you spelled it "MuchOs gracias"... believe me, my first language is Spanish, so I should know (hohohoho). I kind of laughed a lot with this "para verdadero" thingy... it sounds really funny.
    I hope I'll like the sequel as much as the first s, I , I really enjoyed it.
    I'll let you know
    Lots of love...
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on November 10, 2004
    Yay! an update. oh my god, oh my god what is Seto going to do, what happens when he finds out about Joey and Yugi oh the horror! the horror!

    please update soon!!!! (either this or Hellraisers)

    Luv Nightmare
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  • From ANON - Arias5 on November 09, 2004
    ok..AFF.net is being weird...but anyways! YOU UPDATED THIS! yay for you!
    the lemon was a good way to apoligize! it was wonderful ^_^
    do i see a yugi/joey lemon next?! hehe that would be great, ne?
    What will happen to Serenity? i hope that Noa dies >.< i never liked him newayz!
    but then again...will never know what'll happen until you update, right?
    *~peace*~
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  • From ANON - Deb on November 09, 2004
    Omg omg omg!!
    *runs around in circles*
    Niiiice lemon huni heh heh heh ^_~
    Jou and Yugi stuff too! Kool! I thought something might happen again with those two. Its the whole ex-love-of-your-life saga.
    And wheres Yamiiiiii.......??? Please let him be ok....if hes not he'll hate you Care hehe ^_^
    So Mokuba's found out about Noa and Serenity then...i wonder what he's gonna do....something noble i bet hehe ^_~
    Cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
    Much Luv
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - dissention on October 16, 2004
    yay im so glad your back and feeling better after your hiatus from this story, its great
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on October 15, 2004
    Wow an update. What the crap talking toasters??? whats Noa doing now that bastard!!
    “Whatta cute widdle guy, you wook just wike your weirdo uncle Malik, you poor widdle fing.” Great line here, who new Joey could speak baby?

    please update soon Luv Nightmare

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  • From ANON - Arias5 on October 14, 2004
    yay! CiS is updated...lol...talking toaster..wtf?!
    and that Uncle Joey might be a bad influence on Solon...^.^
    that's great that your feeling better and your muses have popped out ..maybe you can introduce us to them..?
    did i hear a marik/baku lemon ........my gods you MUST update frequently.......i can't wait!
    *~brings out the lemon cookies*~
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  • From ANON - Reili on October 14, 2004
    Bakura/Marik lemon? You just officially became my hero. And Yami is, kidnapped? Or was he taken by aliens, too? Mwuahaha. I suck. I haven't read this story in such a while, I almost forgot what was happening. I shall re-read it somet Yes Yes, yes I shall. In the meanwhile, I wish you good wishes, and I hope to see another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Deb on October 14, 2004
    Excellent chapter as usual huni!!
    Poor Yams!! Where is he????
    I know hes been mean lately Care but you didnt have to kill him off! Hehehe ^_^
    LOL and Jous line about Solon being poor coz he looks like Malik was so funny!! Haha!
    Oh and Tristan talking to the toaster was....interesting lmao!!!
    Please update soonies!!!!
    Much Luv and Huggles
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - Debs on September 30, 2004
    Great chapter huni!!!
    Aww poor Malik...whats up with him???
    And Tristan...spooky stuffs happening....^_~
    I cant wait to see whats going to happen next!
    I wonder what Ryou will say when he finds his name on the text!
    Eeeee! So kool!!
    Please update again soonies huni!!
    Chat laterz!
    Much Luv
    Debs xxxx
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on September 30, 2004
    O.K. this is most likely going to be a wierd review but to hells with it. Remember the Trial by Nightmare and Through Hell and back for more I was rereading them and kind of wondering if you were ever going to write a third, like I said its a wierd review but the question has been bouncing off the walls of my empty head so yeah I just had to write it. ALL HAIL BAKURA!!!
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on September 21, 2004
    Please update soon AHHH!!! I'm shriveling uo and dying without your work AHHH *turns into a pile of dust*
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