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Reviews for Carved in Stone

By : MarikIshtar77

From ANON - Xeno on June 23, 2004
Everythinoks oks coolie-o babe!!
Most excellent work, doll!

Xeno
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From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on June 19, 2004
:D Mokie-Pokie!! hehehe, their interaction with each other was great!! Underwear in the freezer!! LMAO!! I mean...I've never done that...*runs for it* Gotta agree with Duke and Tristan about the bank! *hates the bank*

Awww, Malik/Ryou are sooo cute. Love them! Hope Ryou gets better soon!!

Tanya~
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From ANON - Nightmare on June 19, 2004
ETERNAL DARKNESS SHALL CONSUME YOUR SOUL!!!!!!!! mostly because you cut out at the lemon and partly because Mokie and Joey are so mean to Seto! no wonder he's boredering on insanity
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From ANON - dragonkitty on June 18, 2004
and then Mokuba and Noa move into the apartment and they sex! (the hopings of a yaoifangirl) I like this story so much is going on with different
people ^^ yep love it.
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From ANON - Debs on June 18, 2004
Oooooo! King Malik!! Wow this should be really interesting!! Cant wait!!!!!
LMAO! the things Jou and Mokuba did to Seto were brilliant!!! My God i wish i could have seen that in reality that would be excellent!
Malik rubbing Ryou down with oil, eh? Hehehe! That should be....interesting hehehe!!
Pleeease update again soonies!!! ^___^ Cant wait to seat hat happens next!!!
Much Luv,
Debs xxx
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From ANON - Kat on June 18, 2004
*shrieks and falls over laughing* Ohhhh the jokesuba uba and Joey pulled on Seto! Fricken' hysterical! Oooo Mokie-Pokie?! *laughs harder* I love it!!
*sobers up* Uh oh... looks like Joey's really gonna need more ice for his pain.

Whoa... Malik, Ryou and the Kama Sutra??? Umm, oh my god... that ought to be soooo much fun! (yeah, I've read it). I hope Ryou's sunburn heals fast!!!

I can't wait to see what Bakura was reading about. Monday? *pouts* Awww man...

Great chapter!
KB
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From ANON - Nightmare on June 17, 2004
Great chapter. I loved the bit where Yami acts all embarassed and Yugi tells Joey about him being Bakura's sex slave. On a darker note HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO SETO!!!!!!!! IT ISN'T FAIR. However I do hope he starts to treat Joey better. All in all really good chapie

Luv Nightmare
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From SnowLeopard on June 16, 2004
/trying to establish a mind link with author/ Hello? Is this thing on?

Yugi has a flower patterned bedspread??? What else did they do to him at the nuthouse???

/meet me at the mall and we can shop for more appropriate things/

Kisses!! Xeno
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From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on June 16, 2004
great chappy! I really like dit! Can't wait to see what's goign to happen.
*kick adff.n* Why can't I stay signed it *growl*
Uppydat soon ks?
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From ANON - Reili on June 16, 2004
Damnit! I keep missing the blasted chapters! I'm such a bitch. Gah. Anyways, I cry for Seto! It seems like he's going to have blunt force trauma or something. That'd be sad. *sniffs* And now I'm all wondering what this surprise is. It hurts my brain. And my brain already hurts from the stupid studying I've been doing for all my finals. Ugh. Stupid finals.
Your story keeps me alive!
Cheers, yo. Looking forward to Friday.
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From ANON - Kat on June 16, 2004
*laughs* I love Malik's honesty! Oh, I'm so glad Joey and Yugi stopped. Oooooo what Bakura and Marik did to Yami! I love it!! *rubs hands in anticipation of reading "My Pet Yami"* Ohh, way to go Mokuba! Standing up to Seto like that. Good job. It's sad that it had to happen though, but it's time someone did.

Oooo I love it when you give Bakura surprises! They're just so much fun! *grins evilly*

KB
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From ANON - White Nymph on June 16, 2004
Just one question? when Bakura was being 'punished' whos soul room were they in, cause i thought that Ryou's had the gold alter?
ah poor Seto, I feeil strangly sorry for him. can't wait for you to publish @my pet yami' hope he gevereverything he deserves!
White Nymph
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From ANON - Debs on June 16, 2004
Great chappie huni!!
Hmm...i wonder whats going to happen with Yugi and Jou *grins*
Aww im glad Ryous dad was okies with it! Hehe...even though i knew he would be because you said it would! Still great to read it tho hehehe ^_^
Wonder where Malik (and his rod) went......
Cant wait til the Friday update ^_^ it should be great!!!
Much Luv!
Debs xxx
P.S. Work it Croquet! Work it! Yes! Yes!! Yes!!! *roflmao* Cyaz xxx

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From ANON - Deb on June 15, 2004
Hehehe!! Glad you liked the pics!!! Lol! Inspiration....that's another word for it!
Damn right i'd lick the camel!!!!! LMAO!!!! For Bakura, i'd do anything.....and if that means licking some dead animal! Then so be it! Hehehehe!!!
Excellent chappie huni!! I can't wait to see what happens with Kura in the next chapter! Should be great!!! ^__^
OMG!!! Yugi and Jou!!! Am i crazy? Or was that just the best thing! lol! Wonder whats going to happen with Mokuba...hmm....
How many did the cat finally have? lol i know that she was still going when i chatted 2 you...hope ur not overrun lmao!!!
Pleeeeease update again sooooonies!! The tension is so much now you said about something happening to Kura! I need to knowwww!!! *grins*
Much Luv!
Debs xxxx
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From ANON - Deb on June 15, 2004
Hehehe!! Glad you liked the pics!!! Lol! Inspiration....that's another word for it!
Damn right i'd lick the camel!!!!! LMAO!!!! For Bakura, i'd do anything.....and if that means licking some dead animal! Then so be it! Hehehehe!!!
Excellent chappie huni!! I can't wait to see what happens with Kura in the next chapter! Should be great!!! ^__^
OMG!!! Yugi and Jou!!! Am i crazy? Or was that just the best thing! lol! Wonder whats going to happen with Mokuba...hmm....
How many did the cat finally have? lol i know that she was still going when i chatted 2 you...hope ur not overrun lmao!!!
Pleeeeease update again sooooonies!! The tension is so much now you said about something happening to Kura! I need to knowwww!!! *grins*
Much Luv!
Debs xxxx
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