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By : Fel5
  • From ANON - Saelbu on November 09, 2004
    My that was interesting, okay that was the understatement of the year, update soon. ^_^u
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  • From ANON - Lady Shinigami on November 09, 2004
    I know how it is . . . It's just so much FUN to torture the characters--the poor, unwittiinnoinnocent creatures that they are. I can't blame you, since I (and my little sister moreso) am guilty of such cruelty it too. ^_^;;

    And for today's Useless Piece of Information: "Have I Told You Lately That I Love You?" is by either Phil Collins or Rod Stewart. I can't remember who specifically (I think it's Rod Stewart)--I always get them mixed up.


    ~LS
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on November 09, 2004
    You know the weird thing about all this is that I understood every word of what Jou was saying, lol. Update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jill on November 09, 2004
    I get the point! LOL. I'll stop with the spelling...but if you ever do decide you want one, I don't mind. I nearly chocked when i read that abohe she sneeze. I have an extremely powerful, loud sneeze and I have hit my head on the keylock that sticks out of a file cabinet, on the back of a headrest in a car, as well as, and I kid you not, smack dab in the middle of Les Miserables when the messeanger buy is dying on the top of the mound. Dead silence all throught the place, and I have to sneeze while everyone around me is either sniffling, or all out crying. My in-laws STILL won't let me live that one down! I love the swecenecenes between Seto and Joey, and I love that Seto made Joey a caregiver. By the way, in case you wanted to know, that song was by Rod Stewart, and you're right, it's a great song.
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on November 08, 2004
    Great chapter, and I loved the gift fanart you gave me for my b-day! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Jill on November 06, 2004
    I didn't know that about brunet. I know blond sometimes had an 'e' on the end. Thanks for educating me in french 'english. I recently learned the same thoing about canadian 'english'. They like to add an extra 'u' to words like colour (color), honour (honor), etc. I learned that while editing for a yaoi manga scanlation group (Fushichou), if you've ever heard of it. I saw some more words in this chapter that were typos - and I'm not talking about the Katsuya conversation - that's was obviously speeled that way for phoenetic reasons, to make him 'sound' sick! I really have enjoyed this story, and can't wait to see where else it goes, but I hate the thought that it will end in such a terrible way. I hope it turnes out that that is not the 'true' ending. It just seems so sad. Any, th, thanks again for explaining that to me, and please keep updating this great story!
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on November 05, 2004
    This is the perfect B-day present, I'm so glad you updated, can't wait to read more. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Jill on November 05, 2004
    This is a really good story and I have loved every bit of it, but I thought you might want to know you have several misspellings. They are:

    qiuet - I think you m to to say quite.
    brunet - is spelled brunette.
    aswell - you have this as one word.
    savely - I think you meant safely.
    encaged - did you mean encased here?
    wich - should be which
    jewelery - is spelled jewelry
    overmode - not an english word. Maybe you meant overload?
    migrane - is spelled migraine

    Just thought you might want to know in case your first language isn't english and you wanted help to improve it.
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  • From ANON - Li on October 18, 2004
    That was soooooooooooooooo cute! I love this story, probably the best Seto/Jou I've read in the longest time. I absolutely loved it. Enough Jou-angst for the whole family... or not... that would just be wrong -_-' Unless you count your really close Yaoi-fan friends as family, then I think it does count... right? Doesn't it? Oh well, I loved it and I hope to read more stories by you, this was terrific! ^.~

    ~♥~ Li
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on October 16, 2004
    That was beautiful! T_T *cries* It almost makes me want to get married, and I do mean ALMOST! Ja ne. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 16, 2004
    Shoulderlong, golden hair was tied together in a ponytail, held by a simple string of black leather.

    Plwhitwhite silk shirt, black pants and dress shoes, short, blood-red coat with black collar and fitting red scarf-Jou’s whole attire seemed destined to compliment him in any way possible.

    *wipes drool from chin* Oh... YUUUUUUUUMMMMM

    “No comment.”
    With that, the blond brushed past the stunned press, hooked his brunet lover under and sauntered with him through the main entry, never once looking back.
    *claps* Ohhhh beautiful! I loved it! *laughs hysterically*

    “Yes. Yes I will marry you, Jounouchi Katsuya.”
    *squeals, claps and bounces up and down* YAAAAAAAAAAY

    OOOO love it, love it! What a way to end the year!!!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Chikky` on October 15, 2004
    OMG! I loved it!!! And I cried when Jou and Seto broke up... if you do not finish this novel I will have to hurt you seriously. So when so you start writing again... please tell me soon. I wish for you to email me as soon as it starts again because I will read everything... and they better not break up again!
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  • From ANON - Chikky` on October 15, 2004
    OMG! I loved it!!! And I cried when Jou and Seto broke up... if you do not finish this novel I will have to hurt you seriously. So when so you start writing again... please tell me soon. I wish for you to email me as soon as it starts again because I will read everything... and they better not brek up again!
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on October 15, 2004
    That was so funny! LOL Update soon, who said revenge isn't sweet? Ja ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 15, 2004
    “Get on that bed, now, so I can pound you senseless, Jounouchi Katsuya!”
    *laughs* Yeah, do it!

    “Akagi? Yes, I have decided about the changes-no, I am absolutely sure. Hai. Never mind the status, yes-I am very well aware of that, I am the one who wrote it after all. Indubitably. Hai. I expect it tomorrow on my desk-yes, I am aware that it is past twelve now. Your point being? Hn. I thought so. Sayonara.”
    *snorts* You evil tease, you!!!

    “Iie, says here, twelve copies of Urushihara’s ‘Love’, three copies of ‘La Blue Girl’, director’s cut, five ‘Bondage Faries-The Collector’s Edition,’” at this, Sugoroku cringed and shot Yugi a dark look, who had gone almost deathly pale, “and one life-sized inflatable ‘Teeta’ doll, complete with her ‘Plastic Little’ uniform. Paid in advance and to be delivered as soon as possible, Kame Game Shop, Domino City, signed, Muutou Yugi.”
    *shrieks, wakes the neighbors and falls over laughing*

    Obviously, somebody had considered it funny attaching a note with Ryou’s phone number on it, reading ‘will translate Japanese adult movies innglinglish and vice versa for free.”screscreams in laughter and wakes the people across the street*

    *gasps for breath* Otogi's hair... *howls*

    Perfect! Loved every word!!!

    Kat
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