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Reviews for On hidden paths

By : darkangel985
  • From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on October 24, 2005
    Update damn you! XD
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  • From ANON - Jessica on October 19, 2005
    Ooo, Jou is impressin' Kaiba with his mad wilderness skills!...>-
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 19, 2005
    Hey there. I will get onto the next chappie very very soon but today my teachers decided to swamp me with work but never fear it will be done. As you know I think that this is awsome and i still love it. Ahh Kaiba and Joey...wonderful! tee hee email ya soon!
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  • From Reyn on October 19, 2005
    oo! oo! I know a survival tip! Moss always grows on the north side of trees! (nods happily)
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  • From ANON - Linku on October 18, 2005
    That's it?! I want to see some woodland lovens! The fact that I'm a rabid Kaiba/Jou fan doesn't help either... at least a kiss. Please?
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  • From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on October 18, 2005
    Weeeeeee things are...starting to...sort of heat up...lame pun....okay I'll shut up. You update again soon ^_^.
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  • From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on October 14, 2005
    Mweep! Update soon! I needs more of this XD.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 13, 2005
    Lol sorry about that! Anyway!

    Hey cool story and espesh well done since you mentioned that you aren't really that familier with the show and characters. I remember when I first got interested in this show and fanfiction etc my first Yugioh story was appalling and I reckon you've done a fantastic job, I'm impressed with the characterization it took me a long time to really get that right.

    Tee hee this pairing are so funny together and the way you write it makes me chuckle out loud!

    Gah I'm not much of a beta but I'd be happy to have a go at it for you since you asked so nicely, but when looking through I couldn't really see many mistakes. Maybe some odd commas but other than that really well done. Anyway my email is Kittenbelle@hotmail.com so if you would like me to beta just send me an email!

    Can't wait to find out whats going to happen next

    Velvetina



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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 13, 2005
    Hey cool story and espesh well done since you mentioned that you aren't really that familier with the show and characters. I remember when I
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  • From ANON - sg on October 12, 2005
    I find your placement of commas sometimes disturbing, but all in all it's pretty okay. Any chance of Seto being uke? Doesn't look that way, but thought I'd ask...
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  • From ANON - ... on October 11, 2005
    this is really good! ^^.......they're arguing so much, i can just tell that the sex is going to be uber hot.........it wasn't that long of a chappie, so my review isn't going to be that long (b/c i don't have thta much to review on ^.~)......sooooo.......great story and keep up the great work! ^^......*hugs* ja ne and love as thou wilt!
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